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for Diamond in the Rough

by tsorg

schedule February 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
CUTE!CUTE!CUTE! Thumbs up. Smut next right? ^ ^
schedule February 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was a great chapter xxxx

I loved Sev's expression when he found out Albus' full name xxx
schedule February 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
An excellent chapter. I look forward to reading more.
schedule February 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sweet, but not diabetically so, I liked the interplay between the men. So hard to realize when kids grow up on you. In my mind I still see my nephew as a skinny kid, and then I turn around and there is a six'3 ex-military in my kitchen! LOL! So, little Malfoys with tricksy parents--poor kids, they'll never get away with anything, Mum and Dad have done it all already!
schedule February 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11

LOL!!! I wasn
schedule February 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 12

Woohoo! I have been waiting for when Lucius decided to spank her! I loved it too! I guess Hermione can
schedule February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8

Woohoo! Yes you do write lovely smut. I love how Lucius just takes control too. It makes me swoon.

And I had to laugh when Hermione snuck off to do her shopping without her new hubby! Lucius was one step a head of her calling Madam Malkin.. Sometimes I wonder if it bothers Hermione more that he is trying to pick her clothes or that he outsmarted her. LOL

Lovely chapter my dear!
schedule February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9

How funny! So Lucius was rather miffed that Hermione took off without him. I think he better get used to it. I don
schedule February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10

Aw poor Hermione. She cried herself to sleep. I can imagine this would be overwhelming for her. Her whole life has been turned upside-down. I am sure though, Hermione will eventually see the fringe benefits to all of this. LOL!

That was sweet the way Lucius carried her to his bed all snug-a-bug. *swoon*

I love how nonchalant Draco is about everything, drinking his coffee. It
schedule February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What?! What?! no...No...NOOOOOOOOOOOO! I can't have reached the end of your updates already! I can't have! Oh my God! What will I do? How will I cope? Ughhhhawwwwww.....

I think you are a fantastic storyteller, and I appreciate your fic. Thank you so much and please update soon!