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for Diamond in the Rough

by tsorg

schedule February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Each chapter gets even better. Please update soon.
schedule February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 16

Oooo thank you for that image of Lucius in black kid leather gloves! *swoon*
I adore glove porn! LOL

Anyhoo, I loved the funny banter back and forth between Snape and Lucius. I usually can
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 15

I really like how you have done Hermione
person Quiranna
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! Babies! Babies! Babies! More of the little ones...Iwant to see what kind of dad Lucius will make. I just love that mental picture! And I want to see what kind of prego Hemione will be...my friend was rather calm, but my aunt was amazingly moody. We tried to keep her away from anything launchable!!! The woman has a mean right arm and excellent aim...my poor unc got an ashtray upside his head. But more soon! Please! Keep it up!
schedule February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this story! It's one of the fanficitons I keep an eye out for updates daily. You're doing an excellent job and I can't wait for more!
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm so relieved and thrilled you loved Jane Eyre, and I feel like a total slacker compared to you! However do you get so much done? I guess I can explain how I get *nothing* done, and it involves this website... :) The ending of Jane Eyre was really unusual for the time, which has a lot to do with its continuing popularity. If you ever come across a book called Wide Sargasso Sea by Rhys, you might be interested in it as well. It tells the untold story of Rochester's wife in the attic, and how she became to be mad. It's very interesting!

If you need another project (which I'm sure you don't, but once I find a person to recommend literature to, I'm afraid I cannot be contained!), check out Vanity Fair by William Makepeace Thackeray. It stars the inestimable Becky Sharp, the heroine that made imperfect heroines interesting.

Now onto this new chapter! I loved every bit of it and smiled like a fool throughout. I giggled at Hermione's "traitorous body", oh, how I've been there! And the image of little blonde hellraisers cracked me up, especially Hermione's most likely inaccurate assertion that the children will be Gryffindors...sorry hun, I think Lucius' delicious jeans...I mean GENES...will, as you say, breed true.
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 14

Green is my favorite color. And I have to laugh about Lucius taking charge. It almost sounds like he is trying to order you, the author, around.
Good luck on that. LOL

Anyway this was an incredibly hot chapter! I love how Hermione is just dumbstruck at first.
person twinsie
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LMAO at "BBD" - it makes it sound like Luscious Lucius is underwear! Oh wait, that's BVD, isn't it? LOL I also like "DB" ... Deatheater Boy ... has a nice ring to it ... kinda like Wonder Boy ... superhero-ish. LMAO

I thought that was so sweet that Severus was all choked up after finding out about his namesake. I often wondered about how the dour potions professor would take it (had he lived). I think you did it justice and brownie points to you for keeping him alive, by the way (I don't think I've mentioned that yet). =P

Looking forward to the next one. XD Great job!!!
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
they're making babies...they're making babies....oh yea!

so Sev was touched. I could completely see this man awkwardly holding a little baby and completely at a loss until he took one good look at the little person in his arms. I cried for Sev.
schedule February 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
chapter 13


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