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for Diamond in the Rough

by tsorg

schedule February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lovely update as always! I hope you will let us know who Severus will be paired with, even if this is a Lucius/Hermione story?
I look forward to read more!!!
schedule February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I look forward to the next chapter.
schedule February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness, I couldn't stop laughing at the opening. And the Cool Whip was ingenious...have you been catching 9 1/2 Weeks re-runs on TV? I did and it reminded me how HOT Mickey Rourke was, DAMN that man was fine.

You really focused on dialogue in this chapter (apart from the Luc-Lovin) and it was well done. I love how you captured Hermione's multi-thinking while she's being fitted. And a pair of pregger jeans is so appropriate for her.

Thanks for the beta love - you are a wonderful writer to work with.
person Citten
schedule February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
:( you said the worst part that you are almost finished! :( But i so do love the story that i cant get too mad i just hope that you will continue to write more wonderful stories! :) well lucius will be lucius--though i think he would have been somewhat like he is with her even if he had not read the books!!! :) it is just lucius' nature with her to be some what controling. :) but face it. it is one of the things we love about him. i do hope that you do NOT rush too much of the pregancy i want to enjoy some of too!!! :) i do hope that you are feeling better, i hate being sick! and no worries i loved the sense you wrote it was wonderful in many ways.
schedule February 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
And for Severus--a Dark chocolate addict! Hee-hee. Great, now all I want is a Ghiradeli caramel bar. yum!
schedule February 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh man. Poor Hermione. That would drive me insane as well. Lucius is too cute....not usually a word associate with Lucius Malfoy eh? Great update, I can't wait for more!
schedule February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 17

I love it! Lucius is rather a lippy bottom, isn
schedule February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 18

I love all the little touches you
schedule February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hi!! This story is great!!! i love reading it. Great job! I cannot wait to read more. KUDOS!!!
person jlclark
schedule February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story so far. I love how you are pulling L/H together and developing their relationship over time. Even though this is a LM/HG fic I am true SS lover to the end. His role in this story is highly entertaining and I hope you can spend a little time developing him as well; he needs a happy ending. Thanks for the great story and PLEASE update soon.

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