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for Diamond in the Rough

by tsorg

schedule February 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule February 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!! Hee hee! That is so funny with Lucius driving Hermione crazy, and not just in a good way. He seems like he would be a very protectice father. Great job, and I can't wait for more.
schedule February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 25: The sentence about Hermione really being a hellion instead of just the sweet girl one supposes, struck a chord with me. I fully agree. She has many facets and uses whichever one suits the moment.

Oh my, the tension in the Potter living room is thick as a Cornwall fog. Snape
schedule February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 26: Snickering here. I see Lucius as oversolicitous and needlessly controlling of Hermione
schedule February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved the smut in this chapter xxx

I hope you have someone nice to match Sev with xxx

Please add more soon xx
schedule February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Vanity Fair the movie is quite good as well, Reese Witherspoon can do no wrong in my eyes. The book will most definitely lend a lot to your reading experience though. I saw the film first, then read the book and watched the movie again and I gleaned a lot more from the second viewing. If you can't find time for the book, however (which no one in their right mind would hold against you, what with all these lovely updates!) the movie is worth watching independently.

Such a cute chapter! Lucius' foibles regarding the pregnancy had me cracking up, I could definitely see that overprotective nature in the way he treats Hermione, and I can just picture how indulgent he will be with his adorable like platinum-blonde offspring! And Hermione whilst pregnant is just too funny...

LOL at Snape avoiding the Ministry's summons! If only he knew I was right here, waiting for a proposal...surely my husband would understand? :)
schedule February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Strangely, I don't think I have ever reviewed this story and I can't figure out why not. I love it and have devoured every update. As much as they love one another, with her temper and frustration level rising, I think Lucius is about to learn the old adage, "Don't mess with a pregnant woman." ha ha ha

Thank you for a GREAT story!
HG4eva
schedule February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aw thanks hon! I
schedule February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 20

Oh man, this chapter was SO frickin
person MegNutz
schedule February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oooooo so glad to have u back really :D can't wait for the next chapter. keep up the good work!!