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person Anon
schedule July 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I don't get how you can write a story on command and have it be this brilliant.

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person Cyrielle
schedule January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story.
person fanficmom
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness.. this story was excellently written and kept me enthralled the entire time. I am not one to normally critique a story unless it has totally blown me away. Mainly because i read almost all the stories written.
You have done an outstanding job with this story!!
Thanks so much for posting it and giving us all a great story to read!!
person Mangacat
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bah.. you blew me away, again! How do you manage that?? Everytime is that there's a challenge-oneshot I think.. now, I can't get better!! And then it DOES! It's unbelievable.. who did you make a deal with to get such ideas?? Harry's parents, dark artifacts, necromancing Draco, gosh, you just can't stop to be brilliant, can you??
Well, then who am I to object..
Cat
person sp
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Verrrrrrrrrrrry nice. I shall find and read more from you. Continue writing---you are talented
person butterpie
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, nice one, and equally nice to see the boys reinvest each other as worthy in each others eyes. They really do make a strong combination of determination and innate skill as a complimentary duo, don't they? You delivered a great story that I only wish was a movie so that I could see what I imagined as I read it. Kudos to you, so please continue to amaze us all, and thank you ever so much for a peek into your brilliant mind.
person SP777
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Heh! :-)

Now, THAT was interesting, it's been a while since you've done a ''creepy''
story that gets your mind going into overdrive.

As a matter of fact, you do creepy good. O_o

I STILL say you ought to give us a horror story for Halloween which is about
3 months away.

*walks away humming TLC's ''Creep''..or maybe that should be STP's ''Creep''*
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I always love reading your oneshots because they contain all the amazing things you fit into your full length stories... the difference comes in reading it all at once and sometimes it's like there's no chance to breath and I love that. Fantastic job, as always.
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely!!!
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear God, that was simply wonderful. I really like how you tied the book together with this. The little quips and the tender touches were completely amazing. You write very well. I enjoyed the point of view changes you told, of Draco "walking in" on Hermione and Ron...lol and of Harry and his thoughts of pinning Draco...lol I'll definitely have to be getting to read your other stories sometime soon. ;) Wonderful job on this peice.