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for Hidden Intentions

by imera

schedule September 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 10!!!
person Jan
schedule September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Why does Ron always has to be an arse! Gods, I hope Harry gives him hell and makes him crawl to him for forgiveness!

Oh!!!! I can't wait to see what Harry and Draco are going to be up to tonight! I hope it's something really, really yummy!!! ^_~

Please update chapter 9 soon ^_^

Jan
schedule September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 9! Ron is an arse!
schedule September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 8! Looks like Ron didn't do his job as keeper!
person Jan
schedule August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
For English being your third language, I think you've done a great job so far! I should know seeing as English is my second language... which I've started learning since 2001! And I still make lots of mistakes! ^_~

As for the story! Love it! I can't wait to see what's to happen next! Poor Harry, I wonder what Draco's going to do to him next when he comes out of the hospital wing!

Please update chapter 8 soon ^_^

Jan
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story is amazing!! pls continue it :)
person Hitori
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The thing in your mouth is a tongue, not a tong.
You keep your anger in check, not shock.
And Harry was pinned to the wall, I don't think it's possible to be pined to a wall.
person Hitori
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
But I do enjoy the story, please continue. ^^b
person anniea
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow please update soon *kisses*
person Clau
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice so far :)

One question though : shouldn't Snape know the way past the Womping Willow? Hasn't he seen how to go pass it from Remus in book 3? Furthermore, Harry would know that Snape is in on the secret. In that case, why would Harry suggest a hiding place he knows one of their enemy can easily access?