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for Public Love

by dirtydarella

schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol Loved public events but it wasn't the public and it wasn't the events. ;) That was cute. I especially liked the idea that this allowed the pair to be on "middle ground". Great job.
schedule August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Phew! It's very hot here all of a sudden! That was just...delicious! Thank you so much! SP
person Roozette
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was just adorable! I loved it! But I HATE oneshots like this, because now I desperately want a second chapter. *pours* Any plans at all to write more on this? My vote is yes :)

Well done dear :)

Loves!
Roo
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sounds fun!
person Jilliane
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM


Whew! OMG...that was hot! Nice work!
person Vittani
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was beautiful, but I want more. I want the so obvious feelings between the two of em to come out. Maybe at the party. Please write another chapter. Oh and if you do can you email me so I dont miss it.

vittani@aol.com

Hell you can email me if you write anything.
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awww... so cute :D