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June 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hey what gives aren't you doing anymore chappies i will be on the look out for more of this great story and dont worry about spelling mistakes thats why you have spell checker for and if you dont they should know what you mean
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December 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"With Dumbledore gone their was no one there to protect him. Their was no one there that would testify for him, and tell every one that he had been on there side all along."
You used the correct 'there' once in those two sentences. Congrats! You scored 1/4. This story could be a lot better and I usually make a point of not reviewing just to point out spelling but although the story looks interesting actually reading is making my brain bleed out of my ears.
You used the correct 'there' once in those two sentences. Congrats! You scored 1/4. This story could be a lot better and I usually make a point of not reviewing just to point out spelling but although the story looks interesting actually reading is making my brain bleed out of my ears.
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December 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aww good on Harry
what's going to happen with draco?
what's going to happen with draco?
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December 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
the story started pretty good but the relationship between Severus and Harry moved way to fast. And I'm sorry but I will not continue to read the story simply because I am fanaticly anti-harry tops. keep up the good work. Im just strictly a Severus top kind of girl.
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December 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
loved it please up date soon
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December 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Could you update soon? And maybe add what hapened to Draco, and others.
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December 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice!
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December 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I really like this story so far, I can't wait for the next chap:D
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December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nicely done so far. Please keep up the good work.
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October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Give me more!!! I especially like Severus being taken care of by Harry...