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What a wonderful take on ridding the HP world of MoldyVoldie. Phew, and what a sexy slow seduction of Our Hero and Heroine. Please do write more and more and more!

That was without a doubt one of the best fanfictions i have ever read. Normally i don't like stories written from the first person perspective, but you completely engrossed me in her thoughts and emotions! Beautiful,engrossing, and well written congratulation on your work.

i absolutely adore your writing style. Its quite fascinating, it draws you in, deeply, you simply can't stop reading. And yeah to the fantastic lemon chap, it got heart, body and soul. A demonly quality !?!
I dearly hope you're going to write more HG/SS.

Thank you! Like other reviewers, I really enjoyed how you altered Hermione's trust horizon, for lack of a better term. She seems to trust herself more than she trusts Dumbledore's intentions, more than she trusts Harry's "destiny." Good for her; she's smarter than those turkeys any day of the week.

Speaking of days of the week, I'm sorry you had a yucky Sunday during Mardi Gras! I know the slushy hues of which you speak....and that's not the sparkle of clean water on the streets, either. Ugh. But if there was a parade that day (or even the day before), then I can assure you that Lent, which begins the Wednesday after Fat Tuesday, had not yet begun. My point was just that since Lent starts on a Wednesday, by the time the first Sunday in Lent does roll around, the city has had the better part of a week to clean up.

Looking forward to your next story. You write well!

Cheers

CB

My gut feeling is you should get stuck at Atlanta airport more often.

Awesome last chapter... excellent! Thakns, great fic!

Bloody hell, I loved this story!!! Great job! I'm sorry it's over(at least in this universe ;) )

Thanks for the wholly irreverent smashing of the 'canon'; it was delightful.

I soooo liked this journal story type, normally i hate em but you made me like em :D

hope u write more :D

A.V.,

What a marvelous premise! I'm only on Chapter 3 and I have to tell you, good show! It's well-written, it's crisp and concise, and it has an interesting and riveting plotline. And the best bit is, you say it's already complete!

Thanks for sharing it with us.

Cheers,

CB

My dear A.V.,

I'm not even through Chap. 5 yet, but I do feel compelled to point out that this sentence, "When I arrived in Diagon Alley it looked like Bourbon Street on the first Sunday in Lent." would be more effective if you changed "Sunday" to "Wednesday." Though it may not seem like it in our post-Katrina world, New Orleans is very, very good at cleaning up the Mardi Gras mess. It doesn't linger; by the time the first Sunday in Lent rolls around, Rue Bourbon is sparkling.

And now, back to our program.

(Thanks for writing!)

Cheers

CB