AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Plan B

by ApollinaV

person a long time fic reader
schedule May 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You should get stuck in Atlanta more often! That was such an entertaining read...I really enjoyed Hermione's attitude...her inner voice was so spot on...

I'm checking out your stories and it's been a great read so far. I rotflmao'd over Technique. Glad you 'put quill to parchment.'
schedule August 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hiiii. :)

I've been checking religiously for an update to The Gilded Cage. Tonight when I checked, I decided that since I love you're writing so much and there was nothing more to read in TGC yet...I'd check and see if you had any other stories.

Lo and behold, you did! And I loved it! I've never been one for oneshots, I like development and plot and depth and all - not saying those don't have it, lol! - and I actually don't even click on stories here unless they have over 15 chapters. I like length ;). But your writing is just so unique, you have an amazing original style I love, and I wanted to read this because of that.

Yes, it could've been longer, but it was SO GREAT as it was. What an awesome idea! I was majorly impressed, and jealous of your selling of Voldemort's soul. FREAKING AMAZING. And Hermione's personality was so amusing! I would LOVE to have her as a best friend, fo shizzle. This story was top-notch, and I've been reading fanfiction with my severely picky standards for 8 or 9 years now.

In short, this story was incredibly unique and entertaining, and I'm SO HAPPY I decided to read it. Definitely a fav!! All of this applies to The Gilded Cage as well, but then that's a different story. I'm so glad you wrote this! THANK YOU. And if you ever write an original novel that's published, YOU MUST INFORM ME. :D
schedule April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Having been stuck in the Atlanta airport, I would say this was a much better use of your time than what I used my time for.
Lovely little story.

person Darkless
schedule April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! What an original plot device. Sell the soul fragment to a demon...it's so simple it's insane. No final battle, no heartrending deaths, done deal dude. Finite ad nauseum.

Yes, the continuing story felt a little brief, it could have been so much more full and drawn out, but it was a great story all together. I've read a lot of fanfics and you have an original one here. Kudos.
person Kimjo2
schedule February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! Funny! Amusing! And a happy ending! I can ask for no more...except for you to write more stories. You are an amazing author and i am so gratefull to you for shering your time talent and vision. Thanks so much
person elladee
schedule January 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great piece~! I love how you got rid of Voldemort; it has to be the most creative demise I've ever read!! Props to you on a clever, well-written story, and its sweet ending. Lovely!
schedule January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love your writing style--I tend to be a *bit* sarcastic myself, so reading someone that writes the way I think amuses me to no end! I look forward to reading more of your work!!
schedule January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was led to your work from another author - Snapes_goddess. I just started your story and LOVE it. It's an original idea that I'd really quite good. Mormally, stories written in first person turn me off. But, not this time. I love Hermione's internal dialogue and mental ramblings. The Four Seasons - that cracked me up

Off to read the next chapters....
schedule December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Haha, that was time well spent in the airport, I must say. Very well done indeed! I'll have to go check out some of your other stuff now!~M
person erisah
schedule December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was cute. The plan for getting rid of Voldy was fantastically simple, and I didn't mind the whole coffee shop scenario... though I thought Snape was a little OOC in that he didn't snark half as much as normal.

Still, I enjoyed it.

-Erisah