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August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY :)
very nice ending. I think it is funny how he may get to keep the weasleys in his life all because of cormac and ginny... even if it is kinda bullshit but then harry IS a rapist. whats one more little dark half-truth right? You know, in real life this kind of thing is unacceptable to say the least. you and I both know it, but somehow you managed to make us all root for harry and cho in the end. now THAT is the mark of an excellent writer.
and i do hope the short sequal is around 100 chappies :P
EXCELLENT WORK. i will be converting it into an E-book if you are interested. Send a msg to phoenixpc@roadrunner.com :)
later!
very nice ending. I think it is funny how he may get to keep the weasleys in his life all because of cormac and ginny... even if it is kinda bullshit but then harry IS a rapist. whats one more little dark half-truth right? You know, in real life this kind of thing is unacceptable to say the least. you and I both know it, but somehow you managed to make us all root for harry and cho in the end. now THAT is the mark of an excellent writer.
and i do hope the short sequal is around 100 chappies :P
EXCELLENT WORK. i will be converting it into an E-book if you are interested. Send a msg to phoenixpc@roadrunner.com :)
later!
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
and just how is only one more chapter GOOD NEWS???????????????????????????????
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Did I mention this whole Ginny thing got old a few chapters ago? I'll be glad when this Ginny thing is done.
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Only one more chapter? -___- So, we don't get any Harry/Cho? I mean not really. We get maybe one chapter where they are honest about how they feel though really you'll spend a lot of it getting to that point so it is less than one chapter. How sad.
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, as I was checking to see if the denouement had been posted yet, I thought I'd add one more observation:
As weak as you only know that I am, understand how much it
As weak as you only know that I am, understand how much it
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg, you're doing this again. This has been quite the rollercoaster, but that just adds to the enjoyment of the story. Since there's only two chapters left this will have to be resolved quickly, although that doesn' mean we're going to like it. Damn, i really would have liked a happy ending. I was really hopeful that finally harry was going to make the final stand and throw ginny away like the rubbish she is. Eh, can't get what we always want, although I'm curious do you plan on writing more after this, I would love to see some more Harry/Cho.
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August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story! I could do with another 34 chapters :) i have to say that even though you call it "smut with a storyline" i think it is more than that, true we read stories on sites like this for the adult content, but you have woven quite an enjoyable tale into it and you write the sex-scenes very well. You capture the feelings emotionally and physically in great detail and really draw us in. High praises all around!
OH, and before i forget, THANK YOU for not using the ever popular "arse" instead of ass. I have read roughly 140 hp fics...yes i am a junkie :P... and people insist on using "arse" ALL THE TIME. i really dont know if thats the way it goes for English people but i have heard them talk millions of times and even with their accent it sounds like "ass" to me... only the scots and Irish sound it out "arse" in my opinion... really drives me nuts when i see harry calling someone an "arsehole" LOL of course, using "Bum" instead of
Butt" is another story... Ok i am done ranting... LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!!!!!!
OH, and before i forget, THANK YOU for not using the ever popular "arse" instead of ass. I have read roughly 140 hp fics...yes i am a junkie :P... and people insist on using "arse" ALL THE TIME. i really dont know if thats the way it goes for English people but i have heard them talk millions of times and even with their accent it sounds like "ass" to me... only the scots and Irish sound it out "arse" in my opinion... really drives me nuts when i see harry calling someone an "arsehole" LOL of course, using "Bum" instead of
Butt" is another story... Ok i am done ranting... LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!!!!!!
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August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
man, i wish this story wouldn't end. i'm enjoying this way too much.
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August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i so wanna see how it ends...i keep hitting the new button over and over...
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August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
2-3 more? nah i say go for 2-3 hundred LOL
i am really loving this story. keep up the great work. I always look for a new chappie as soon as i get home from work every morning!
Is there any other HP fics you have written? and you are right, harry/cho is lacking so badly. maybe you could be the top harry/choo fic shipper? all i know is that you should keep churning them out :)
untill next time!
by the way, the arse/ass debate: at least you didnyt use it every other frickin word!!!!!! lmao
i am really loving this story. keep up the great work. I always look for a new chappie as soon as i get home from work every morning!
Is there any other HP fics you have written? and you are right, harry/cho is lacking so badly. maybe you could be the top harry/choo fic shipper? all i know is that you should keep churning them out :)
untill next time!
by the way, the arse/ass debate: at least you didnyt use it every other frickin word!!!!!! lmao