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I've just completed the whole of the fanfic and, needless to say, it was brilliant. Very well written and entertaining with a well though out plot. Last chapter was a bit too rushed for my liking (everything happened really quickly), but I nonetheless enjoyed the whole thing immensely. I have noticed that you've written a sequel but I'll probably not read it(I generally avoid M/M pairings where possible, no offense).

Looking forward to reading some more great fanfics from you,

Somatose.

Nicksaw, thank you for the review and the compliment of the it having something special. That really means a lot, and I really appreciate it. Look out for the sequels to this story too. I'm having them beta'd right now.

I'm not usually a big fan of stories like this. But this one, it has something special. Wonderful, wonderful story. Brilliantly written. A perfect ten.


Thank you.

If the Prophet and pedestal pisses him off as much as he says they do, then Harry needs to stop being a pussy about it, and do something. He could actually accomplish both with one act, quite literally killing two birds with one stone. All it would take, is a visit to the Prophet building, and expressiong his displeasure in a very violent way. It would stop the articles, and it would go a long way in knocking him off the pedestal. I don't know about you, but I'd have been ready to take out half a city block for that tripe; at the very least make the Prophet office go boom.

NarutosBrat, I wanted to respond to your idea. If Harry had blown the Prophet up or stormed in there angry and violent, because they and the wizarding world loved him so much, they would have forgiven him. They would have simply decided that he had been under the enormous amount of pressure we all know he actually is, and they'd pat him on the back of his hand, if not his back for having the strength and courage to show his human side by being enraged. It wouldn't have worked. That's why with Cho in this story, it was kept a secret what he was doing, though he took joy in the beginning for doing something that wasn't so befitting of a hero even in private. He seemed content in keeping up the facade as long as he had his outlet with Cho.
Thanks for reading and reviewing by the way, I really appreciate it!

fantastic story. one of the best I have red of AFF. Your descriptions are vivid and the plot feels well thought out and put together!

just stumbled on your story and read it in one sitting! I have always been a Harry/cho fan and there are truly not enough stories out there with this pairing. Though the story may have started off somewhat disturbing I loved the ending. Can't wait for the sequel!

My god...,it took me a week and a half to finish this thing! I kept avoiding reading this story at first, but it kept calling me. I'm glad I listened.

I can believe that Harry is insaine. If we are to believe canon then he's had a fragment of Voldemort's soul almost all his life. There has to be some effect of having a piece of a mad man's soul inside of you.

Then only bad thing about this story is that it was an Ron/Hermione fic. They just don't fit together. I prefer Ron/Luna with either Harry/Hermione or Viktor/Hermione is Harry is with a deserving female that isn't Ginnie.

Yes, I want there to be a sequel, no matter how short it is. This was just good all round. If I were to even make an attempt at writings characters in the angsty hole you put them in I couldn't get myself nor the characters out of said hole.

this Mewtwo will wait on the sequel.

Hey Mewtwo, glad you listened to yourself and read the story, I really appreciate it! I did just want to comment on what you said about writing characters in an angsty hole. I know when I'm writing the emotion in a scene or what have you, I have to feel it at that moment so it could flow easier from me. And I almost feel just as trapped as I've made the characters if thats what they are feeling. I wrote a story for another site where Harry and another person were trapped in Grimmauld place for almost a month, trapped meaning he was not allowed outside for getting caught and the person decided they'd stay with him. But when I finally got them to so much as go to a wedding, I felt so free!lol It hurts me to read sections of that story because I feel like clawing the walls to get out!lol And like in this story, I was tense when it came to referring to everyone coming back to the castle after the holiday break. I wanted Harry and Cho to be alone forever!
Anyway, thanks for reading it, sorry for the rambling. Hope you enjoy the sequal when I finish it!

Hey, twocanz, your two cents is always good!

Yes, my biggest problem with Ginny was how predictable her romance with Harry became. It was the obvious choice, and I was already bored by it when I first saw the signs in CoS. HBP was a major disappointment for me on many levels, not only was it disheartening to see my suspicions confirmed that Ginny would indeed end up with Harry, but I was absolutely gutted that it wasn't Harry/Luna. In fact, Rowling all but ignored her in that book, and relegated Luna to a very minor character. I felt cheated. I thought Luna was one of the most interesting characters in the series and she would have most definitely been a *challenge* (yeah, that was important for me, too) for our Boy Hero. Instead, JK just turned her into an oddity for Harry. I mean, what was the point of her name, for crying out loud, if not to give us the idea of a love interest? What a waste.

I confess, though, that I can stand stories of the Harry/Ginny pairing when Luna is added in the mix. They make a lovely threesome, and the imagery suggested of Harry being surrounded by his "moon" and "sun" is endearing. Ginny could have been a much more dimensional character, she could have been a good foil for Harry's mood swings, but JK never gave her enough to do. Personally, I thought she performed character assassination on the girl by the sixth book.