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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I feel like the confrontation with Harry began nd ended too quickly. Years of friendship should have warranted more. And she forgave to easily. And I don't know, I feel as if this chapter was rushed.
But you know I love this story, I can't wait for more.
But you know I love this story, I can't wait for more.
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! You had the confrontation with Harry and Hermione perfect. She would not have ranted and raved she would be mature with a hint of snark. Can't wait for more.
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July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awwww this is really cute! i love it!
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July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, I like this!! Ron and Harry are iddiots and Hermione and Severus are grown enough to treat eachother with respect, not to mention the deligthful attraction:-))
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July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this. I love the easy way Severus now has about him. Hermione seems to be interested already which seems to be a good thing. I was wondering if in the future you plan to have a confrontaion with Harry, Hermione and Severus? I seem to like a bit of angst when it comes to Hermione and Severus. I just think she does it so well. Great job can't wait for the update.
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July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I still love the story. Nice job on the third chapter. P;z update soon
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July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
In my next chapter, I plan on having that confrontation with Harry, Hermione, and Sev. It is going to be a good showdown between the three and I think you will be surprised at how it starts. Once again, thank you all for taking the time to read and review, it is appreciated.
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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wanted to thank you all for reviewing. This is my first time writing a fanfic, so this is new to me. I am glad that people seem to like it so far. I am open to suggestion and constructive criticism, because that is the only way to grow as a writer. As for those looking forward to updates, I should be doing that fairly often until the story is completed. Once again, thank you so much.
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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
DAMN is what i thought after I got done with the second chapter. WOW ok i would LOVE an update and soon.... I love it already
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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a tasty pictire of Severus you paint. I am a little surprised that you have Harry against Hermione in this story but, that could be quit interesting. Great job glad that you you updated so soon. Looking forward to next time.