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March 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed the concept and storyline. The dialog seems a little monotone though.
Still enjoyed. thanks!
Still enjoyed. thanks!
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February 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It is easy to picture Snape as you describe him and it is great that Hermione let him know that she was no longer married. yay! Not sure I agree with Kingsley about her needing to talk to Ron so that she can move on. I think it is different when there is cheating than when you grow apart. She can move on without getting into a discussion with Ron. Loving your story. p
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February 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The only thing better than SS taking Ron to task for his behavior would have been if his parents had thrown him out. Of course, he probably found out about the party from them, even if inadvertently. Your HG and SS are great and HP coming to his scnses was a great bonus. p
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February 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! You let Hermione save the day. I was afraid that Ron would tell someone what Lucius had planned and he would be saving the day. And what better way to take care of Lucius, that snake, but to make him look like one too. Excellent chapter!! p
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February 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! I would have liked you to throw in a little paragraph telling the kids that Kingsley was coming for dinner after he secured his snake or better yet, asked if he could bring it along since the kids loved it and had played with it since they were very small. Anyway, loved your story. It was a very enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing. p
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November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great job, it was wonderful!
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November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awwww that was adorable!
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November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a great story xxx
I was ecstatic when Ron got what was coming to him xxxx
Cannot wait to read from you in the future
I was ecstatic when Ron got what was coming to him xxxx
Cannot wait to read from you in the future
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November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I give up ! Where is the Epilogue ? We are anxiously waiting for the end of this great story. Please do hurry with it !!!!
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October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I thought that I would take the time to explain why I had Sev dress in an MM shirt with a spike in his ear. My thought is simply this, it was Halloween and I wanted him to get in the spirit. I realize that it is OOC, and kind of jars with the story, but it was fun to write. Thanks again for all of the wonderful reviews.