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for Moestitia Liberi

by DarkestTempest

schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 3!!!! What creature are they? Ian liked Draco from the start!!! Hmmm.
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 2! What about Rory and Blaise?
person LisaMaj
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey there. Well, this is my first time in the Harry Potter section and this is the first fic I've read and I'm glad it was my first, as I loved the first chapter. Its very well written and the letter was great, I hate writibng letters, yours had a lot of feeling in it.

Thanks for sharing and I really hope to see more soon.

person Lifvared
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This sounds so cool! please update soon!!
person Selera
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I would suggest Blaise possibly.. *Thinks* Otherwise go with a OMC from Ravenclaw... *laughs* Anyways I like the start of this keep it up and you are lucky knowing other authors.. I'm alone! *Sobs*
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I would think Hermione and Blaise since he is a Slytherin and friends with Draco.
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well i like it. i've read both twins and circomstances so far so its interesting
person alma
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good start.
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i don't really think you can get an overdone idea in fanfic, everyone always has their own spin on it. if someone thinks the idea has been done too much then they don't need to read it. ian is the only thing i can think of for damian or omen but then the harry potter world probably wouldn't come up with that. Have you thought about nevill for hermione, he's pure blood and could have found a backbone and stand up to ron when he goes his predictable temper tantrum. looking forward to more of the story.