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for Moestitia Liberi

by DarkestTempest

schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. Happy to see we get Draco and Harry's meeting next.
person Vittani
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well this is really brilliant. I love it. You're right it is cliched, but has just the right ones. I nearly groaned when i heard they were going to be creatures. not cos i dont like creatures but a lot of authors have good things going then ruin them with creature in heritance. But that inheritance was fantastic, not cliched at all.

Oh quick question, whats happening with Remus? Where is he in all this? I hope he's a good guy cos I just love him, n i'd love it if he ended up with Sev too. Ok hinting a little too much arent I. Anyway I love it. Is there any chance you could email me when you update so I dont miss it? If so my address is...

vittani@aol.com

Thanks
Vitt
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo can't wait for chapter 5!!!!
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh gods!!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!
I love it, :( but it was short and it left me wanting much more
so please update soon I'm having so much fun reading this fic
take care oh and I love the familiars now buh bai

Love
Lola
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is wonderful..Please update soon
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello
well I...I love the fic with all the cliches and whatnots it's original and it grabs your attention It's great.It intrigues me to no end my sis Lifvared talk to me about it and I just knew I had to read it. but who are the bad guys besides Dumbledore I mean? Crabbe and Goyle will be dumb still?

In other things how about an albino boa constrictor for Rory and a panther for Ian kind of exotic like them,how about Zabini for Rory?

Can't wait for monday take care

Love
Lola
person Selera
schedule July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it and look forward to the next part.
person LisaMaj
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello. Well, it's only the third chapter and it's already exciting and making me hunger for more. The memories were good and the reactions were great too. I can't wait for the shopping trip, to see their new looks. I also can't wait for Dumbledores reaction, the old goat.

Anyway, as to familiars, I found this site with some suggestions:

http://homepage.mac.com/whymme/WFRP/rules/magic/Familiars/list/list.html

It's cool and I was thinking, the cat for Aurora and the viper, or the Raven for Damian. As to a pairing for Aurora, I would say Blaise, as he is Draco's friend. I can't really think of anyone else, unless one of the Weasley's, like Fred or George, or even Charlie, but I dont know, it just doesnt seem right, so I vote for Blaise.

Anyway, thanks for posting again so soon. I cant wait until the next chapter. It's awesome and I'm actually excited about reading a story.

Take care and hope you have a great weekend.
person alma
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter.
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh how wonderful! I sooo need chapter 4!