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October 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
write more its really good
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April 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome are you planning on finishing it?
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March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome story!!! Please update soon.
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August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh no!!!! I sooo need chapter 7!!!
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August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i find chapter 1 rather hard to believe. Hermione and Harry just learned that they are twins, their parents were in a threesome relationship, Voldemort (someone they have learned to kill) is their grandfather, Albus (someone they have always trusted) is a manipulative bastard AND that they may not even be human becuase of the creature inheritance. All this and they just accept it within a few hours? ...umlikely. a little more developpement is in order i think. on the bright side (didnt mean to point out all the flaws...) i really like where this story is going. it has a whole lot of potential, sooooooo off i go to keep reading. good job ^^
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August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wait you can't leave it here......Does Dumbles know that the spells broke and that Aurora and Damian know everything? I can't remember......And I'm sorry, but Neville has to be pretty stupid to go see the man who cast an Oblivate and an unknown spell on him...did the second one bin his power or something?
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August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MORE lmao WE ALL NEED MORE!!!!
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August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hated the ending but it was a good chapter. Glad you put Remus in. Update soon.
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August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like it utplease son' let nev ge killed by evil albus just le nev get out of it save his parents and fght with harry
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August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Crap not good not good!