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July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(Chapter 7)
Well, Harry seems to be seeing the error of his ways. We'll see if he continues to do so, or acts out again, and what the toll on Severus will be.
Nice chapter, and I'm looking forward to the update!
Well, Harry seems to be seeing the error of his ways. We'll see if he continues to do so, or acts out again, and what the toll on Severus will be.
Nice chapter, and I'm looking forward to the update!
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July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh. God, poor them. I'm nor really sure who is suffering more... I change my mind every few lines I read. Strong, wicked, well done, I guess. Please keep on going, its brilliant!
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July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i dont understand.why snape do this.harry looks like james? or he is spy? or dumbledore want? poor harry.
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July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It will become more apparent why Snape is doing this as time goes by. I am torturing both of them, I know, but I love the irony of the situation.
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July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(Chapter 5)
Harry, Harry, Harry......always having to learn the hard way.
Poor Severus. I like it that punishing Harry doesn't seem to come easily to him, and that he takes no joy in it. The portrait of Lily on his study wall....it seems she is the motivation behind him looking after Harry. And he begs her to help Harry not to hate him, and for Severus not to hate himself. Interesting. Like I said, with each nre chapter, I'm liking this story more and more.
Looking forward to the update. If you have an update alert mailing list, please add me. jillianetpr@yahoo.com Thanks!
Harry, Harry, Harry......always having to learn the hard way.
Poor Severus. I like it that punishing Harry doesn't seem to come easily to him, and that he takes no joy in it. The portrait of Lily on his study wall....it seems she is the motivation behind him looking after Harry. And he begs her to help Harry not to hate him, and for Severus not to hate himself. Interesting. Like I said, with each nre chapter, I'm liking this story more and more.
Looking forward to the update. If you have an update alert mailing list, please add me. jillianetpr@yahoo.com Thanks!
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July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, God, Harry is of of his mind. Is he really so daft not to notice how much he hurts Severus besides hurting himself?
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July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am glad you are enjoying it. I'm finding it very fun to write, actually. I've always loved Harry and Severus together, especially when Snape has a secret well of kindness.
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July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
can't wait for more, great story so far!!!!
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July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(Chapters 3 & 4)
With these two chapters I'm liking this even more. I love stories where Severus shows his more human, redeeming qualities. I'm thinking some "tough love" is in store for Harry now that Severus has agreed to help purge him of his hate and anger. You are showing Severus' hidden well of kindness, but you're still keeping him in character, and I liked it when he grudgingly admitted he did indeed care about Harry. Nice work! I'm looking forward to more updates.
With these two chapters I'm liking this even more. I love stories where Severus shows his more human, redeeming qualities. I'm thinking some "tough love" is in store for Harry now that Severus has agreed to help purge him of his hate and anger. You are showing Severus' hidden well of kindness, but you're still keeping him in character, and I liked it when he grudgingly admitted he did indeed care about Harry. Nice work! I'm looking forward to more updates.
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July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(Chapters 1 & 2)
Interesting! That's a new take on Harry's vanquishing of Voldemort, and of how Snape becomes his guardian. I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this. Update soon, please.
Interesting! That's a new take on Harry's vanquishing of Voldemort, and of how Snape becomes his guardian. I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this. Update soon, please.