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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(Chapter 10)
Aww....poor Harry, being rejected by Severus. Will this drive him to act out again, forcing Severus to punish him? Will Harry decide any attention is better than rejection and make his situation more difficult?
Can't wait for the update.
Aww....poor Harry, being rejected by Severus. Will this drive him to act out again, forcing Severus to punish him? Will Harry decide any attention is better than rejection and make his situation more difficult?
Can't wait for the update.
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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, I
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July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good story, please update soon.
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July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved writing Bloody Quill. I'm really getting to enjoy this story the deeper it goes, and I hope you all feel the same way. I love your reviews, and I look forward to reading the news ones every time I see them. Thank you all for rating and reviewing so highly, I'm really quite pleased that you are enjoying my story.
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July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(Chapter 8)
"Let me break him before I have to..."
Argghh! Well now, of course, you have me dying for the next chapter! Which was your intent, oh evil writer!
Interesting that Harry is now asking for the punishment. I suppose it's the dread of anticipation, and wanting it to be over instead of having it hanging over his head. I realise the punishment is for his resistance and for breaking the dishes, but I had wondered if Severus might have relented upon seeing that Harry couldn't carry through with stabbing him when challenged to do it while looking Severus in the eye.
The last line..."Let me break him..." was a little disturbing. I'm assuming Severus is talking about breaking Harry of his bad behaviour, and not of his spirit, right? It's just that the rest of that sentence, "...before I have to...." sounds a little ominous.
Please hurry and update!
"Let me break him before I have to..."
Argghh! Well now, of course, you have me dying for the next chapter! Which was your intent, oh evil writer!
Interesting that Harry is now asking for the punishment. I suppose it's the dread of anticipation, and wanting it to be over instead of having it hanging over his head. I realise the punishment is for his resistance and for breaking the dishes, but I had wondered if Severus might have relented upon seeing that Harry couldn't carry through with stabbing him when challenged to do it while looking Severus in the eye.
The last line..."Let me break him..." was a little disturbing. I'm assuming Severus is talking about breaking Harry of his bad behaviour, and not of his spirit, right? It's just that the rest of that sentence, "...before I have to...." sounds a little ominous.
Please hurry and update!
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July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OK, this one hurt. Harry calling for his mother to help him, and accusing Severus that he got it of by punishing him... It just hurt to read it.
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July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL! Harry doesn't seem to hate Snape THAT much now...
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July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(Chapter 9)
Well, that was certainly a turnabout!
Looking forward to the next update!
Well, that was certainly a turnabout!
Looking forward to the next update!
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July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(Chapter 6)
I feel sorry for Severus with this story. Not so much for Harry. Especially after he kept going for the book even after being Cruciolused(?) twice. It's kind of frustrating to read of his bullheadedness. Makes me want to give him smack myself. It's too bead he doesn't realise how much punishing him hurts Severus. I hope he realises soon how childish he's being.
Looking forward to the update.
I feel sorry for Severus with this story. Not so much for Harry. Especially after he kept going for the book even after being Cruciolused(?) twice. It's kind of frustrating to read of his bullheadedness. Makes me want to give him smack myself. It's too bead he doesn't realise how much punishing him hurts Severus. I hope he realises soon how childish he's being.
Looking forward to the update.
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July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now, that's a start! Thank you, dear!