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for Everything You Do Seduces Me

by hphglover

person Phoenix_fire23
schedule December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love this story it is a great song fic i was wondering if you are going to take To Love You at Last to HPFF i loved it on fanfiction.net i was hopeing it would get more fan base to see it on there.
person DarQuing
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I would have liked a little more detail on their lovemaking, but I suppose I can accept it. ;)

I didn't really read the lyrics, though. I'm not big on songfics. :P

Overall, I enjoyed it. :)
person Anon
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The writing it good but the plot is sickenlingly cliche
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was really gorgeous. I thought it had a really nice balance of sweetness, depth, and passion. I especially liked how even though it's obvious how much he wants her, through all of it he's still her best friend. Good job.
person Lilac
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very sweet, I enjoyed this story a lot.
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well I really enjoyed it - a lovely romantic story. It didn't need tons of dialogue cos it was just about the two of them and you wrote them so well. Aw, I feel all loved up now *sighs*