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for This is the Way I Break

by graballz

schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was great! I laughed out loud at Draco's reaction to Facebook. I hope they make it through the trip to England okay. I can almost smell the upheaval brewing.
person SP777
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I forgot to ask, doesn't Harry still have money left over in Gringotts in
this story? Couldn't they have found a nice Hotel???

What about Draco? How is his financial situation?
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 3!!!! Thank goodness for Roo!
person Roozette
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahahahahaha... oh man! Yep, yep that's me! The sad thing? Yesterday, I was walking to my car after work while reading a text I received, and walked straight into a group of people. They were gracious about it, but then I read your story where "I" walked into a group of tourists... Made me pause and look suspiciously at the sky. Is Big Brother watching me? *strikes a pose to be safe*

Gabz! I loved my cameo! You made me a person Draco didn't want to hex even after being woken up! *is blissful* And the mental image of them cuddling together? Tres adorable. Although now I suppose I need to open a Facebook account, on the off chance Harry tries to friend me. *grin*

So - You said housing for the boys won't be permanant until Chap 4? That means this coming up chapter will deal at least in part with the Weasley's. *huggles boys protectively* That won't be very fun, although I am curious about Mrs. Weasley's illness.

*blows kisses*
Roo
person Roozette
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok, so I'm a freak who reads your review responses. *shrugs*

I like gorgeousbrowneyes suggestion of buying their own place. Although I don't think they would rent it out when they go back to America, as they are both rather zealous in regards to their privacy. Then again, there's always Malfoy Manor, which Draco technically owns. Or they could buy The Burrow and level it to the ground while laughing maniacally. *blinks innocently* Or not.

Loves!
Roo
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh its lovely. she was surprised to know that ppl cared.
person Draca Malfoy
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I suppose you are forgiven! *give cookies*


OMG! IT'S EVERY FUCKING FANGIRL EVER!!!!!

Fantasmic, want more!

PS: MISS YOU! *huggles*
person Guess who
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*peeks around the corner* I've been a bad friend, for that I apologize. I haven't talked to any of you girls in a long time. *whimpers* I read the first chapter when the same day you posted it but my internet spazzed before I could review but lucky when you posted this one, I was right around the corner.

Pray and Dance are still my favorites. I can't wait to see how this one will turn out. I'm really surprised that Harry did through a hissy fit about not being able to stay in his own house (or Draco for that matter) but I'm sure you have your reasons for that. I, on the other hand, would have raised holy hell.

I miss you! How have you been? Are you mad at me? *shamed-face* I haven't called because sadly I'm on a new phone, my third to be exact since I got your number the first time. Life has been really busy but it's winding down at the moment. Other then that I've been up and down, just got over a summer flu, which totally sucked ass. Hehe, the images that came to mind. But I feel totally guilty about going Awol.

MN
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
They're going to end up staying at the Burrow, was my first thought. Then my next thought was that they're going to stay somewhere REALLY expensive 'coz Harry has the money. And then my very next thought was that he'd just buy a place in England which they can rent out when they go back to America, or have as a holiday home for if family or friends ever get sick again. And Roo was hilarious in this! AND I feel so honored that I have next dibs on the next OC you find yourself in need of. Really, very very honored. I think I kinda jumped up and down on my seat with this huge grin on my face for about five seconds until I realised I was being childish, and decided it didn't matter n kept going for a few more seconds, before running out of steam. lol.

Hmm, I had thought about the adversity that gay people face, but I suppose I didn't really THINK about it if you get what I mean. I didn't stop to think that they'd be denied entry to hotels, or bars, or clubs or anything like that. I suppose it's because I'm open minded and don't ask questions and accept everyone as they are, I just thought everyone would. I worked in a little kids shoe store for quite a while, and I've served at least two lesbian couples (out of a gazillion I might add) who had a child, somehow, and were getting their 'first pair of shoes' and all that, and I just treated them like everyone else, and I don't think I quite realised that they were together until about halfway through serving them. It was kinda hard though because normally you defer to the mother out of instinct because they generally have a better idea of what size the child is, or what kinds of things they need and is practicable, and I was just kinda like, uhhhh I'll just throw this question out there then. It really irks me when people are discriminatory, and I know that my Nanna is one of the worst racist people out there and it really annoys me. Just today she was like 'those bloody ad-dabs' and I was like 'what?' and she was like, 'you know, arabs.' I was just kinda like OMG you don't say that!!!!!!!!!!!!! But she's old so I kind of forgive her for being set in her ways. Diversity is lost on the older generations.

OH! I checked your friends pictures out, I'll comment them on DA for you both :P He's really good at drawing!

Eeek, well I better go, I've left a long review again, with mostly ramblings in it I'm sorry! lol.
~gorgeousbowneyes


person SP777
schedule July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well for what it's worth, it is good to have you back.

...and I see we have a ''foreboding'' start, sooo what rollercoaster ride are we
in for now?