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August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Link for my pic! http://gorgeousbowneyes.deviantart.com/art/Sexy-Draco-58991113 It's actually quite old these days. I've started learning animae drawing techniques - manga etc. so I've got heaps of other stuff I just can't be stuffed to upload. lol
For the chapter - my GOD I LOVED IT!!! I love angst, specially when I'm in the mood for it, and my gosh, I love argument scenes that get a little bit out of control, like too many people involved and sometimes with an audience, and doing things in public that they shouldn't be doing. Now, I know Draco is hurting, but that scene at the end there, absolutely perfect hun! I really felt for them and boy do I love it when they make a scene. And the Healer! I was happy that Arthur defended them, but it was rather out of the blue. Like yes I'd expect him to defend Harry, but I dno I just didn't think he'd be sooo violent. And Harry's comment. I was like OMG GASP. I wondered whether Molly knew or not, and was like I hope this isn't a shock for her espec now she's sick. But Ron's comment made me think he had told his family but twisted it to suit him instead of the truth.
Well that's about it for now, I gotta get to bed, great work once again!
~gorgeousbowneyes
PS I tried to post this two days ago but my internet fell out because the provider was having issues! Just as I was about to press review! So I saved a copy so I could post it when the net came back!
For the chapter - my GOD I LOVED IT!!! I love angst, specially when I'm in the mood for it, and my gosh, I love argument scenes that get a little bit out of control, like too many people involved and sometimes with an audience, and doing things in public that they shouldn't be doing. Now, I know Draco is hurting, but that scene at the end there, absolutely perfect hun! I really felt for them and boy do I love it when they make a scene. And the Healer! I was happy that Arthur defended them, but it was rather out of the blue. Like yes I'd expect him to defend Harry, but I dno I just didn't think he'd be sooo violent. And Harry's comment. I was like OMG GASP. I wondered whether Molly knew or not, and was like I hope this isn't a shock for her espec now she's sick. But Ron's comment made me think he had told his family but twisted it to suit him instead of the truth.
Well that's about it for now, I gotta get to bed, great work once again!
~gorgeousbowneyes
PS I tried to post this two days ago but my internet fell out because the provider was having issues! Just as I was about to press review! So I saved a copy so I could post it when the net came back!
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August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! So much drama. I wonder how Arthur is going to explain that. And I hope that Draco and Harry can iron themselves out. Draco's going through the wringer right now. He really needs to lean on Harry.
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August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm back again. For how long I don't know. I just wanted to stop by and tell you that I'm still hanging in there and reading. Take as long as you want to update. It's taking me forever and a day to read. *sighs dramatically* Life...
Love you and the angst is getting to me a bit. I'll have to go read something else you wrote that I love. Oooor, go back to HIYA.
Gotta run.
Nikki
Love you and the angst is getting to me a bit. I'll have to go read something else you wrote that I love. Oooor, go back to HIYA.
Gotta run.
Nikki
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August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! You sooo had me laughing! My family thought I was losing it! Gotta have chapter 6!!!
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August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY, an update! I was just finishing posting my NEW STORY (OH MY GOD ITS A MIRACLE THAT I'M WRITING AGAIN) and checking it out on the New page, and going oh yeh, I'm good! when what did I see but an update from this story and I was like, wow this night just keeps getting better and better! I get my mojo back and pump out like three chapters in one hit for this new story AND an update from Break!!!
I was wondering where they were going to sleep. I figured it would be weird for Harry to sleep in his dead parents room, but figured there really wasn't anywhere else in the house for them to sleep in. I was kinda like, well are they going to sleep in the same bed coz that would be even weirder, and then you answered my thoughts with the whole transfiguring a mattress. You're right, it would be squick factor for them to have sex on his dead parents bed, but not only that, I don't think Harry himself would even be able to perform in that kind of situation. I know I wouldn't want to sleep on that bed let alone make love, knowing that it belonged to my dead parents, were I Harry.
James' read panties ... I don't see it honestly. Not with him with Lily. But that's just me, right. Some people can so I'm all good with it. And the condoms ... I cracked up laughing. I thought that was the best thing they found in the whole room lol! Although Lily's gift was quite a good thing to find as well, very beautiful scene there.
And your welcome for the comments on DA, I know what it's like over there, very hard to get any kind of reviews whatsoever because it's not as well designed I don't think. You should check out a drawing I did of Draco off of a picture that is online somewhere, I think he's a Draco look-alike, coz it was based of a human photo but wasn't Tom Felton (I don't think!!!)
Well, looking forward to more, as usual!
~gorgeousbowneyes
I was wondering where they were going to sleep. I figured it would be weird for Harry to sleep in his dead parents room, but figured there really wasn't anywhere else in the house for them to sleep in. I was kinda like, well are they going to sleep in the same bed coz that would be even weirder, and then you answered my thoughts with the whole transfiguring a mattress. You're right, it would be squick factor for them to have sex on his dead parents bed, but not only that, I don't think Harry himself would even be able to perform in that kind of situation. I know I wouldn't want to sleep on that bed let alone make love, knowing that it belonged to my dead parents, were I Harry.
James' read panties ... I don't see it honestly. Not with him with Lily. But that's just me, right. Some people can so I'm all good with it. And the condoms ... I cracked up laughing. I thought that was the best thing they found in the whole room lol! Although Lily's gift was quite a good thing to find as well, very beautiful scene there.
And your welcome for the comments on DA, I know what it's like over there, very hard to get any kind of reviews whatsoever because it's not as well designed I don't think. You should check out a drawing I did of Draco off of a picture that is online somewhere, I think he's a Draco look-alike, coz it was based of a human photo but wasn't Tom Felton (I don't think!!!)
Well, looking forward to more, as usual!
~gorgeousbowneyes
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August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lol thanks for your MANY reviews on I Love My Boyfriend! loved them. You should go check out the review I left that reviewer on her story after she reviewed me lol. I already told her all that :P
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August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And now I'm hogging your review space! I couldn't stop giggling all the way through reading the review you left for I Love My Boyfriend Two!!! Yes, payback is a bitch isn't it? lol. I *might* be able to fit in the shower scene, you like, read my mind or something. I didn't end up writing shower sex though. But I'm going to fit your scenario into it in a later scene just for you! lol.
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August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter Grabby. Angsty, but not overly so I think. It helped that Draco was there to lighten it up. Loved the personal touches you added like the reading glasses and the books. The underwear bit made me smile, and totally agree. Could have found a pair of thong underwear in James drawer? lol. Or 'toys' in the parents nightstands....now that would be 'a not need to know about your parents' type of thing. lol. There so much more they could find on a personal level...like music, recipe books, photo albums, christmas ornaments, toys that Harry played with, and so on. Is Harry going to be keeping any of these things to take home with him? He should I think. Anyways....another great chapter...wish I had the motivation to get to my fics. lol. I read WAY too much. Just missed you on chat today, some day we'll click huh? hugs.
~tas
~tas
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August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've gone from feeling bad to feeling worse. I've been using my sisters laptop because 1. my laptop has been down for a while and I'm too lazy to get her fixed and 2. the desktop isn't going online anymore and I'm too lazy to get it fixed. Not to mention school has been kicking me in the ass big time. I have a week off this week and I'm spending most of it in school making up time missed. But I miss you guys too, Draca, Tassy, Gabby and the rest of the girls. I'm trying to make a comeback but I find it really hard to do when I'm passed out from exhaustion.
As for the story: the series started all light and fluffy and as it went it picked up angst and depth. Dude! That is the wrong direction to go for a smut story. :-P just kidding, I'm loving it not as much as Pray and Dance but I really am loving it. it's like we're meetng a new Harry and Draco after some time apart. Not to mention one of the places on my list of places to vacation is really close to being crossed out. Are you really going to have them stay there? Why didn't I think of that? I feel slow.
Love you lots,
Nikki
As for the story: the series started all light and fluffy and as it went it picked up angst and depth. Dude! That is the wrong direction to go for a smut story. :-P just kidding, I'm loving it not as much as Pray and Dance but I really am loving it. it's like we're meetng a new Harry and Draco after some time apart. Not to mention one of the places on my list of places to vacation is really close to being crossed out. Are you really going to have them stay there? Why didn't I think of that? I feel slow.
Love you lots,
Nikki
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August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh much more dramatic place for them to stay then. I must admit, the line where Draco was telling Harry that it's OK, just after he said 'Mummy' and was all like 'she's not in pain anymore, he can't hurt her' that line made me tear up. I was fully like nearly spilling tears, no wonder you had the tissue warning at the top! I rather enjoyed this chapter, and I'm beating myself up coz I must have missed it on the new page recently coz I ended up doing a search for this story coz I hadn't seen it in a while and thought it was a little odd that you hadn't updated, and figured I must have missed it! Which I had! damnit lol.
And I've been slack! I said I'd comment the artwork your friend did and I haven't yet, but I'm going to go do that now, because I did have a look at them the other day, but I was strapped for time and it was when you'd just uploaded that chapter with the links in it so I was desperate to get onto reading the chapter before I had to go out!! lol.
Right, well I'm heaps tired 2nite, its 1am and I should get going to go comment those pics so I can get to bed!
~gorgeousbowneyes
PS If you didn't get it from my gushing above, I loved the chapter!
And I've been slack! I said I'd comment the artwork your friend did and I haven't yet, but I'm going to go do that now, because I did have a look at them the other day, but I was strapped for time and it was when you'd just uploaded that chapter with the links in it so I was desperate to get onto reading the chapter before I had to go out!! lol.
Right, well I'm heaps tired 2nite, its 1am and I should get going to go comment those pics so I can get to bed!
~gorgeousbowneyes
PS If you didn't get it from my gushing above, I loved the chapter!