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November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hotness shower sex!!! I forgot you were a grammar Nazi ..... if you met me in real life, you would HATE the way I speak. My grammar is TERRIBLE. I've picked up from an English friend the saying 'oh that's heaps good' or 'that's well good' and I said it the other day to a friend of mine and she was like 'heaps good?? talk about bad grammar' and I was like .... uhhhh ..... yeah .... lol.
For some reason I avoid writing smut scenes a lot lately. I just don't have the inspiration to do so ... and when I know the story I'm writing needs one, I'm like *groan* such a chore. Weird. I don't even know why I don't like writing it, coz I definitely like reading it.... I don't know, maybe it's some kind of sense of 'propriety' or something that doesn't want to be crude or something ... all my sex scenes recently are more metaphoric than actual if you get what I mean.
Well, I better get back to that assignment that is due 2moz that I've only done a tiny bit of so far .... I'm so screwed.
Thanks for the distraction, it was a wonderful read! I'm actually hoping for some plotty advancements for the next chapter though, which is weird coz usually I'm more of a 'id rather read PWP than a plotty story' kind of person.
~gorgeousbowneye
For some reason I avoid writing smut scenes a lot lately. I just don't have the inspiration to do so ... and when I know the story I'm writing needs one, I'm like *groan* such a chore. Weird. I don't even know why I don't like writing it, coz I definitely like reading it.... I don't know, maybe it's some kind of sense of 'propriety' or something that doesn't want to be crude or something ... all my sex scenes recently are more metaphoric than actual if you get what I mean.
Well, I better get back to that assignment that is due 2moz that I've only done a tiny bit of so far .... I'm so screwed.
Thanks for the distraction, it was a wonderful read! I'm actually hoping for some plotty advancements for the next chapter though, which is weird coz usually I'm more of a 'id rather read PWP than a plotty story' kind of person.
~gorgeousbowneye
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November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy smoke!!! Sooo need chapter 10!!!
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November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey Grabby,
Another great chapter!!!! Love the smexy scene. Maybe it will inspire me to work on my own fics - lol.
~tas
Another great chapter!!!! Love the smexy scene. Maybe it will inspire me to work on my own fics - lol.
~tas
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November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was perfect! I love those two in the shower anyway, and there was a little fluff, which was just awesome.
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November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
1st: *le groan* and I think I have everytime I've heard that joke. Here's another for you. A teacher was taking attendance when she noticed three of her students missing. Not too long after she began her lesson did one of them walked in. Where were you she asked and the boy replied I was blowing bubbles. As time went on the other boys walked in and their replies were the same. The teacher sighed and went back to teaching. Soon a girl walked in. How may I help you asked the teacher. The girl replied: "Hi, I'm the new student, Bubbles."
2nd: I feel like I can't win for losing. I have a lot to catch up on with you and a lot to tell you.
3rd: I want to say I have no idea how I missed this great chapter but sadly enough I do. I was out of a computer for a while when both the desktop and the laptop bit the dust at nearly the same time. But I'm back and I'm ready for you to update. Pretty Please.
Nikki
PS:. I have a new number and phone because I couldn't hang on to one phone if my life depended on it. So I don't have any phone numbers, sniffle. Love you and hope to hear from you soon.
2nd: I feel like I can't win for losing. I have a lot to catch up on with you and a lot to tell you.
3rd: I want to say I have no idea how I missed this great chapter but sadly enough I do. I was out of a computer for a while when both the desktop and the laptop bit the dust at nearly the same time. But I'm back and I'm ready for you to update. Pretty Please.
Nikki
PS:. I have a new number and phone because I couldn't hang on to one phone if my life depended on it. So I don't have any phone numbers, sniffle. Love you and hope to hear from you soon.
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October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You're back! Oh man I missed you! My life... has been hectic. I officially banned the month of September. As in throwing my calender away, unplugging my phone, not updating anything I'm writing... September SUCKED. It shall henceforth be referred to as That-Which-Must-Not-Be-Named. But it's October now! Yeahness! And you updated, so things are definately looking up!
I LIKED this scene! I told you it would be good to establish a sense of new family layered over his old one. It wasn't squicky at all. It was perfect! Wow, I'm really down with the exclamation points tonight, aren't I? Sorry about that.
But now I'm worried! Because they had fantastic sex here, are going to have fantastic sex in the next chapter, but after that... back to dealing with the Emoness. But it will be good, because having a happy day off to rest *cough* and recharge their batteries may be enough to help our boys get through this ordeal.
Kudos on the black belt love!
Roo
I LIKED this scene! I told you it would be good to establish a sense of new family layered over his old one. It wasn't squicky at all. It was perfect! Wow, I'm really down with the exclamation points tonight, aren't I? Sorry about that.
But now I'm worried! Because they had fantastic sex here, are going to have fantastic sex in the next chapter, but after that... back to dealing with the Emoness. But it will be good, because having a happy day off to rest *cough* and recharge their batteries may be enough to help our boys get through this ordeal.
Kudos on the black belt love!
Roo
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October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was beautiful!!! I sooo need chapter 9!!!
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October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ahhhh such a lovely sex scene!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And I reckon you absolutely MUST write the dish it scene too!!! I'm not sure when you posted this chapter, I've been out of fanfiction for a while because I'm currently going through my LAST EXAMS FOR A VERY LONG TIME. lol. So I'm quite busy with everything going on atm, and haven't been checking on AFF as frequently as I used to. But it's Saturday, and surprisingly I had a Harry/Draco related dream last night so I decided this morning I would check up on how this story was going.
And boy did I like seeing an update there!! lol.
I get that you didn't want them to break up, that's cool. You're friend's relationship sounds like one of my friends. Her and her boyfriend have been dating on and off for a very long time, and he broke up with her once on christmas eve and I thought they were finally over for good this time, and while I was sad with her, I was happy that he was gone. Then he called her up like a week later, not wanting to get back together, but wanting some 'booty' so of course her being in love with him still, agreed and continued sleeping with him even though he was just using her. About a month later I had finally convinced her this was so not good for her, and she decided to move to Sydney with her uncle and uncle's bf as they moved down later that month. She was gone a week, when the guy called her back and said he missed her and loved her and please will he take her back coz he was being stupid and he misses her so much. So she came back to be with him again. They were together for a few months, then he cheated on her, they split for a while and then she forgave him and they got back together. Currently they're still together, but she recently cheated on him, which I was kind of like well fair enough he's done that to you enough times, and I also think it means she's getting over him and moving on soon... hopefully. *sigh* It's hard as well coz she's one of my best friends currently but back in the day, like about three years ago we 'dated' as young teenagers experimenting with sexuality and stuff and she basically broke my heart then, but we kept being friends. Since I've mostly realised I was being a stupid young teenager and had mixed up the feeling of good friends with something I thought was more than that, so it was easy to get over that once I realised it wasn't that kind of relationship. And on the issue of sexuality, I mostly lean towards straight, and currently have a boyfriend. Although he pisses me off a lot lately, he's always so negative, if I say something he takes the worst out of it and presumes different things .... I don't know if its working really.
Ok well, that's a lot of stuff about me and not much about your story lol. Although I can't really say much more for sex scenes than HOTTT. lol. And also that I'm glad they 'reconnected' in a sexual way after their .... well the easiest word for it is fight.... , I sometimes find that that can help just as much as talking in a relationship. And I just watched the Sex in the City Movie last night for the first time, and having re-read the last bit of the previous chapter, it reminded me of Carrie and Big(sp?) in her closet, with Draco and Harry lying down to sleep. If you've seen it you'll get what I mean, if not you should because it was so fucking fantastic, and this coming from someone who'd never watched any Sex in the City before in her life when it was a TV show.
Right, well, good luck with the next few chapters, I look forward to seeing more!!!
~gorgeousbowneyes
And boy did I like seeing an update there!! lol.
I get that you didn't want them to break up, that's cool. You're friend's relationship sounds like one of my friends. Her and her boyfriend have been dating on and off for a very long time, and he broke up with her once on christmas eve and I thought they were finally over for good this time, and while I was sad with her, I was happy that he was gone. Then he called her up like a week later, not wanting to get back together, but wanting some 'booty' so of course her being in love with him still, agreed and continued sleeping with him even though he was just using her. About a month later I had finally convinced her this was so not good for her, and she decided to move to Sydney with her uncle and uncle's bf as they moved down later that month. She was gone a week, when the guy called her back and said he missed her and loved her and please will he take her back coz he was being stupid and he misses her so much. So she came back to be with him again. They were together for a few months, then he cheated on her, they split for a while and then she forgave him and they got back together. Currently they're still together, but she recently cheated on him, which I was kind of like well fair enough he's done that to you enough times, and I also think it means she's getting over him and moving on soon... hopefully. *sigh* It's hard as well coz she's one of my best friends currently but back in the day, like about three years ago we 'dated' as young teenagers experimenting with sexuality and stuff and she basically broke my heart then, but we kept being friends. Since I've mostly realised I was being a stupid young teenager and had mixed up the feeling of good friends with something I thought was more than that, so it was easy to get over that once I realised it wasn't that kind of relationship. And on the issue of sexuality, I mostly lean towards straight, and currently have a boyfriend. Although he pisses me off a lot lately, he's always so negative, if I say something he takes the worst out of it and presumes different things .... I don't know if its working really.
Ok well, that's a lot of stuff about me and not much about your story lol. Although I can't really say much more for sex scenes than HOTTT. lol. And also that I'm glad they 'reconnected' in a sexual way after their .... well the easiest word for it is fight.... , I sometimes find that that can help just as much as talking in a relationship. And I just watched the Sex in the City Movie last night for the first time, and having re-read the last bit of the previous chapter, it reminded me of Carrie and Big(sp?) in her closet, with Draco and Harry lying down to sleep. If you've seen it you'll get what I mean, if not you should because it was so fucking fantastic, and this coming from someone who'd never watched any Sex in the City before in her life when it was a TV show.
Right, well, good luck with the next few chapters, I look forward to seeing more!!!
~gorgeousbowneyes
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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey Grabby,
Great chapter - as always. lol. Liked the smex (read that somewhere 'smex' - like it. lol). Anyway, love shower chapters. Your dirty/clean joke was pretty lame, but it made me shake my head and say to myself - only Grabby?! lol. Haven't been much for writing lately myself so take your time with the P&S and Inches (duck as some of the readers glare in my direction lol). Who knows maybe that would get me writing again *shrugs*. Anyway, miss you and the rest of the Coven group. I'll read over our little chapters challenge sometime soon and send it back.
~tas
Great chapter - as always. lol. Liked the smex (read that somewhere 'smex' - like it. lol). Anyway, love shower chapters. Your dirty/clean joke was pretty lame, but it made me shake my head and say to myself - only Grabby?! lol. Haven't been much for writing lately myself so take your time with the P&S and Inches (duck as some of the readers glare in my direction lol). Who knows maybe that would get me writing again *shrugs*. Anyway, miss you and the rest of the Coven group. I'll read over our little chapters challenge sometime soon and send it back.
~tas
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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i just love your sex scenes!