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I love your story!! It's really very good. I can't wait for the next bit!

I don't think she would have any feelings for Ron, other than anger, but I don't know how she could love Draco as a woman loves a man, it would almost have to be as mother loves a child because he acts like a child so much. Lucius acts much more like a lover. I think Draco is going to have to have some more lucid moments for their relationship to survive. Good story -- thanks for updating.

oh my holy gosh...this is an EXCELLENT response to this challenge...holy crap. you're doing an AMAZING job...please, i beg you, keep up the good work! this is completely intense and i love it!

I think you are doing a great job! I love the plot and sub-plots. I hope Draco regains some of his sanity as the story goes on, I like that Lucius is kind to Hermione and hope they continue to have a special relationship, and of course Ron needs to be dealt with although Hermione did nicely in this chapter. :-) The sex scenes are going well too. The more you write them the more comfortable you will probably be, and of course we all love detailed sex scenes. I am looking forward to the next chapter so keep up the good work!

Morgana

(Chapters 1,2,3)


Aww! Your reviews didn't repost! Alrighty then, I'll just have to review again!

I'm not a Hermione fan, but this fic has me captivated. The writing is fabulous, the plot is interesting and original, and I'm intrigued by Draco's madness, and his obsession with Hermione. Some of the questions I had asked in previous reviews were answered in the third chapter, but I still can't help but wonder if Draco's jealousy and obsession will keep him from harming Delphine. As you've moved this story to the Draco/Hermione section I assume the future relationship will be between them, but I wonder how smoothly it will go, and if Ron will be a major problem or not.

I'm looking forward to the update!

I think you've done an amazing job with this challenge! Lucius is just as I imagine him, and Draco's madness is described so well. I like the way that Hermione is trying to make the best of this horrible situation.

I also like the way that the sex scenes further the plot and illuminate the characters, instead of just being mindless smut (not that I dislike PWP's).

I think you've done a great job for your first time writing erotic stories. I've been reading this website for years, and would have never thought this was your first story that included sex.

Love your story! Keep going!

i really liked it, guaranteed it was a lil weird but i liked it lots.

I love the story! I hate Ron, not just for betraying Hermione, but also for judging her now. I like Lucius and slightly mad Draco. The Snape/Ginny sparks are great too.

And Hermione is wonderful, dealing with a terrible situation after Ron's betrayal, and coming to love Draco, even if it isn't an easy love. The erotica is well written too; I loved the bit before Ron stormed in and got spit on (go Hermione!).

Can't wait for more.