schedule
July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is amazing. I can't wait to read more, I hope you update soon!
schedule
July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading through the 6 chapters that are up and I have t say that this story is awesome. it's a combination of like 4-5 storylines and you've woven them together just superbly. I'll be looking out for future updates.
schedule
July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(Chapter 6)
Wow. Poor....everybody, although I would have to say, in the face of everything everyone has been through, Hermione seems to have gotten off the easiest. Despite being sold off by Ron and then forced to be a breeder for Lucius and Draco, they've been kind to her and tried to make the best of the situation by taking care of her.
Tonks' mention of climbing out of a mass grave at Hogwarts gave me the shivers. I can't imagine the horror that must have been. I'm glad that she and Lucius can take the first steps to forging something new and find a spot of happiness in the hopeless situation they are in.
And at last we know what has gone on between Severus and Ginny and drawn them together. So they, along with Fred, whom we've learned is alive, are werewolves. What about Ron and Molly then? And Severus putting his wand to his head upon learning that Ginny had shared their secrets. I somehow can't see Severus killing himself at this stage of the game, not in front of Ginny, and not simply because he's angry. embarassed and ashamed. He's been in that position too many times before, so what was he going to do?
And then we have Hermione and her sudden burst of magic. I'm afraid of what this means. Does it mean Draco has succeeded in his plan? Will the child Hermione is carrying grow up without it's father? Is Voldemort dead? Is Delphine now safe? Are Hermione, Tonks, and the other women now free of their enslavement bands?
(I'm so tempted to say, "Find out the answers to all this and more in the next chapter!" but I won't!)
Please update soon! This enquiring mind wants to know!
(Btw, I like this chapter better than the FFN one.)
Wow. Poor....everybody, although I would have to say, in the face of everything everyone has been through, Hermione seems to have gotten off the easiest. Despite being sold off by Ron and then forced to be a breeder for Lucius and Draco, they've been kind to her and tried to make the best of the situation by taking care of her.
Tonks' mention of climbing out of a mass grave at Hogwarts gave me the shivers. I can't imagine the horror that must have been. I'm glad that she and Lucius can take the first steps to forging something new and find a spot of happiness in the hopeless situation they are in.
And at last we know what has gone on between Severus and Ginny and drawn them together. So they, along with Fred, whom we've learned is alive, are werewolves. What about Ron and Molly then? And Severus putting his wand to his head upon learning that Ginny had shared their secrets. I somehow can't see Severus killing himself at this stage of the game, not in front of Ginny, and not simply because he's angry. embarassed and ashamed. He's been in that position too many times before, so what was he going to do?
And then we have Hermione and her sudden burst of magic. I'm afraid of what this means. Does it mean Draco has succeeded in his plan? Will the child Hermione is carrying grow up without it's father? Is Voldemort dead? Is Delphine now safe? Are Hermione, Tonks, and the other women now free of their enslavement bands?
(I'm so tempted to say, "Find out the answers to all this and more in the next chapter!" but I won't!)
Please update soon! This enquiring mind wants to know!
(Btw, I like this chapter better than the FFN one.)
schedule
July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow what an interesting first chap... i can not believe ron turned her over how horrible... well at least the malfoys are not real bad i mean it could be worse... great job
schedule
July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, keep going!
schedule
July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love snapes reaction to everything...especially the ending
schedule
July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting turn of events, although I am not quite sure how Greyback is turning the girls. Is he biting them so that they mature more quickly? Thanks for sending update notices.
schedule
July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOooo...what a powerful last line.
schedule
July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What happend to Fred? He was alive in the start, then you just sort of droped him
schedule
July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very well done so far. For some oen who is new at writing smut, you do it in a very good mannor. You also do Draco's madness well. Its a sort of more twisted (and for good reason) version of Pany's from your other serries.