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person Anon
schedule August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful now write more update soon
schedule August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm generally not a het smut reader, but I found msyelf leaning forward getting more and more frustrated that Hermione and Draco couldn't be together. You're gonna update right? RIGHT?! SP
schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GODS FUCKING BRILLIANT, i didnt think this story would be so deep and so emotionally and original. It was sooo good i even cried when draco dissappeared and how he lost his memories, and the madness of the entire storyline fit so seamlessly, it really unhinged me in good way. I love it, I love it, poor hermione...i cannot wait for draco (drew) to find his way back SOON, GODS I cant wait for u to upadate so please do it soon and keep up the amazing work.
person Anon
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Draco. I hope he brings that muggle family to Hogwards to see it and that people than recognise him...
person Myene
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Intresting...this could be a very volital meetign when Draco/Drew comes to hogwarts.

Would also like to see more info on what the magical/muggle peace deal is.
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like this. different from what i usually read. kind of sad to see crazy draco has been replaced with amnesiac draco. i wonder how he will first be identified? maybe school shopping with niahm someone will say 'hi draco' or something more dramatic. his eyes meet hermiones from across a room and his memmory is instantly restored. whatever it is it'll no doubt be better than any of my guesses. i look forward to finding out what it is.
person Anon
schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is beautiful I love it. Poor draco thinking his is drew and poor little niamph
How will hermione and draco get back together.
Beautiful
Please update soon
schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, your a.n. at the end asked us to let you know what we think, so here goes: What I think is that you are absolutely EVIL for keeping us on tenterhooks like this. Oh, yeah, and that your Ali Khan was very nicely drawn, and that I like what you've done in melding the Muggle and Wizarding worlds, and that all your OCs are very three dimensional, with nothing remotely Mary Sue about them that I can see. Now, I do think that it is unbelievable that Lucius and Hermione wouldn't have gone through the wreckage of Little Hangleton with a fine tooth comb and had Aurors go over every square inch of it looking for Draco's body, but I'm entertained enough by everything else you've done to worry about that overmuch. Again, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
person Jilliane
schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(Chapter 8)

Thanks so much for your kind words!


It's getting so difficult to review this story....but only because I'm running out of words to describe the awesomeness of it. In terms of quality of writing, imagination, originality, and scope, I think you've just hit a new high. It's the scope and dimension, not to mention the impressive writing and it's all just enthralling. Your writing is big and epic and just so freaking fantastic! You know I am not a fan of Hermione, but your Hermione.....suffice it to say that you've done the impossible and actually made me feel for her! It was so sad, I felt badly for her when Ali Khan had to leave, but even so, I can't help but hold out for Draco returning to her...her lost boy...the tragedy of it....feeling that he's out there, not knowing for sure, hoping against hope.......And then the lost boy himself, Draco, with his new and good life. His madness gone, a new job, a new purpose, people who love and care about him....but always the lingering shadow of his former life. Will Draco and Hermione ever find one another again? Will Niamh going off to Hogwarts be what brings them together? Will Draco know Hermione if they do find one another? Will he remember her? Delphine? Will Scorpius gain a father? OMG, please update again soon! I can barely wait to find out!

person Myene
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Drew? for the DR sound?

Why did he survive and the child did not?

Intresting chappie. I like how, after and year/2 years of being ruled over, they arn't wizard, but just some odd people in funny outfits.