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August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey Girl! I really like this story : )
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August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my not what I expected, you fast forwarded very quickly, but it was still enjoyable and love the fact that Draco/Drew was sooo responsive to hermy, and I couldn't believe Maeve even had doubts about the girl, anyway I do hope they continue to move towards each other but I knoe draco is gonna start to remember and boy oh boy are things gonna get complicated. Please keep up the good work as I enjoy reading your story with a vengance, please keep the updates coming.
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August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good progess. I was hoping you wouldn't have a 'hit-on-head' type moment and then him all the sudenly remembering everything.
Now, its like draco 2.0!
Now, its like draco 2.0!
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August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(Chapter 10)
Oh my God, what an excellent chapter! Even if Draco doesn't remember Hermione full out, at least he's making the effort to get to know her again. He still feels attraction for her, and want's to act on it. I think Ginny was right when she told Hermione it was good that Drca isn't the same person she knew before. Ginny is right when she said that Draco was a boy and this one is a man. I wonder if he'll ever remember he way he used to be. I almost hope he doesn't. He's a happier more content person this way. I just hope he and Hermione can build a relationship again, and that he can be a father to his kids.
Again, excellent chapter, and I can't wait for the next update!
Oh my God, what an excellent chapter! Even if Draco doesn't remember Hermione full out, at least he's making the effort to get to know her again. He still feels attraction for her, and want's to act on it. I think Ginny was right when she told Hermione it was good that Drca isn't the same person she knew before. Ginny is right when she said that Draco was a boy and this one is a man. I wonder if he'll ever remember he way he used to be. I almost hope he doesn't. He's a happier more content person this way. I just hope he and Hermione can build a relationship again, and that he can be a father to his kids.
Again, excellent chapter, and I can't wait for the next update!
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August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's really difficult to find even decent fanfiction here and lo and behold I've come across an unbelievably amazing one that makes me giddy everytime I see the next chapter link (I was extremely disappointed there wasn't one for chapter 9)
As twisted as this possibility is, especially in comparison to JK Rowling, it does seem that in the crueler world of Death Eaters, this would be the type of sick delusional things they would do. You've done a great job in describing the atmosphere, the angst and the broken-ness (for lack of a better word) of the characters.
Amnesia is such a tricky component of fanfiction due to its horrid cliche-ness so I'll admit to a tiny bit of disappointment when you pulled that card. But to be fair, he was technically supposed to die... so I'll let it slide haha.
Thanks for writing :D Looking forward to the next chapter!
As twisted as this possibility is, especially in comparison to JK Rowling, it does seem that in the crueler world of Death Eaters, this would be the type of sick delusional things they would do. You've done a great job in describing the atmosphere, the angst and the broken-ness (for lack of a better word) of the characters.
Amnesia is such a tricky component of fanfiction due to its horrid cliche-ness so I'll admit to a tiny bit of disappointment when you pulled that card. But to be fair, he was technically supposed to die... so I'll let it slide haha.
Thanks for writing :D Looking forward to the next chapter!
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August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I found your story this afternoon and have been fascinated by it. I hope you'll be updating soon.
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August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a good update - I meant to review before but I forget so i had to come back - poor Hermione though. I feel like she's been a bit left behind. Especially by Lucius, I know he's busy with the ministry but it seems like he just left her with his daughter to raise herself (along with Draco's son). I hope Draco eventually remembers her, but at the same time I hope he can leave the memories of his mother behind - so that he does not relapse into that crazy stage he was going through at the begining of this story.
Hopefully I'll find out soon!
Hopefully I'll find out soon!
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August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(Chapter 9)
I liked the bit with Lucius and Severus arguing over how to change Valerie's nappy..lol...I can just picture it in my head. It was a nice little bit of humour in an otherwise sad chapter. Poor Draco...so confused, so torn. Poor Hermione...Draco doesn't remember her...yet....perhaps when he hears her name it will spark something? Poor Lucius, his son is even more of a stranger to him now than when he was in the grip of his madness. I hope all that has and will happen to Draco doesn't spark a relapse. The question is....will he remember enough to want to stay in the Wizarding world, or will he want to forget enough that he flees back to the Muggle world? This was another great chapter excellently written and I'm looking forward to the update.
I liked the bit with Lucius and Severus arguing over how to change Valerie's nappy..lol...I can just picture it in my head. It was a nice little bit of humour in an otherwise sad chapter. Poor Draco...so confused, so torn. Poor Hermione...Draco doesn't remember her...yet....perhaps when he hears her name it will spark something? Poor Lucius, his son is even more of a stranger to him now than when he was in the grip of his madness. I hope all that has and will happen to Draco doesn't spark a relapse. The question is....will he remember enough to want to stay in the Wizarding world, or will he want to forget enough that he flees back to the Muggle world? This was another great chapter excellently written and I'm looking forward to the update.
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August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw, bless! Poor Hermione and poor Drew/Draco, they never seem to get it together, do they? I can't believe how awesomely creative this story is!
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August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HOLY HEAVEN and RAMPAGING HIPPOGRIFFS that was a slap in the face chapter if I have ever read one, geez, boy did cry and was I ever holding my breath and knawing at my fingers for what will happen. First of all I am pleased that drew/draco found them so quickly, but know the real drama starts. POOR POOR hermione, those last few lines killed me, i was a sobbing mess, I have not been this emotional for a fic in a long time. Please, Please keep the drama, emotion and rawness coming and update soon, pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!