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October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
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July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, Ron is such a prick!
I love where this is going. Please write more soon.
I love where this is going. Please write more soon.
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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good premise for the story, but you might want to get a beta. It's very choppy and doesn't flow well; you need to go into more detail about how they became friends, unless your totally AUing it, which I don't seem to see as you have the seventh book referenced. Conversations should be less formal, and be drawn out a bit longer, not just strait to the point.
Why the hell is Harry with Charlie? Even if you just like the ship, you need to have a reason behind it, like Ginny turned gay or fooled around behind his back, or even they just decided to call it off cuz they weren't right for each other. Then you need to figure out why he is with Charlie, blah blah blah. Personally I am not a big fan of Harry turning gay unless its a Ginny F/F fic, cuz there is no reason for it. Anyway, the idea is good at least.
Why the hell is Harry with Charlie? Even if you just like the ship, you need to have a reason behind it, like Ginny turned gay or fooled around behind his back, or even they just decided to call it off cuz they weren't right for each other. Then you need to figure out why he is with Charlie, blah blah blah. Personally I am not a big fan of Harry turning gay unless its a Ginny F/F fic, cuz there is no reason for it. Anyway, the idea is good at least.