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for Marriage Betrayal

by Babelfish

person Persy
schedule June 16, 2021 at 12:00 AM

I ought to snack you!!!! Didn't see THAT one coming!!!!!!!

schedule March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I DONT GET IT! am confused! the man Hermione said she was is married to etc is SNAPE? then why did she keep saying NO etc to him and saying she is married but in the end did it anyway even though she was married to him anyway? why did you make it as if she was is married to someone else and was cheating on her husband with snape if the husband IS snape anyway? or was it that after that night of passion with snape that she left her husband whoever it was some time later and got married snape instead?

please reply!
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it! You think she is coming to Hogwarts after marrying someone else (Ron perhaps-GAG!) and that Severus is obviously pissed. Then you think she is going to cheat on her 'husband' with Severus and have a torrid affair. When it's all said and done, it's actually Severus she is married to. WICKED twist! Very good. I didn't see it coming until I read the 'wake up' part at the end.

Thanks for the interesting read!
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HaaHaaa! Wicked! Nicely hidden secret. So many questions avoided but staff and students about the "Know-It-All" and the "Greasy Git" and the bit of role playing at the end must have been fun for them... naughty professors.....
person Prospera
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't get it...is pretending they're not married when she first arrives a game? Why would they keep up the charade once they were alone if not a game. But were they both in on it or is it also a trick? I think it would be better if there were another chapter explaining the set up.
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I didnt get it. Nicely written, but i didnt get it