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The paddle to the labia did make me cringe; I knew Draco was going to be very cruel so I can

Oh God... Are you sure he can to it without braking Severus? He is strong, but this is getting wicked.

Draco is 16 in this story, and clearly already very twisted. I'm glad people are enjoying him, and I promise there will be plenty of conflict coming up in future chapters. Snape may seem as if he's given up, but Draco just hasn't pushed his boundaries enough to make his godfather lash out, however, that is all about to change.

Just wanted to tell you that I'm really enjoying this..it's stretch to believe Snape would give in so easily and not use Slytherin tactics to find a way out of this but it's sexy as hell...love your Draco. I hope you continue writing it. It may help if you space out the paragraphs more to make it easier to read but other than that, I think it's very well written : )

I changed up the format of the chapters, broke up the long paragraphs some and put more space between the smaller paragraphs. Thank you for mentioning that SoftObsidian74, and for your kind review. I was worried my rather blocky paragraphs would be hard on the eyes on a computer screen. I hope this way it's better.

Really hot. I love Severus/Draco fics and this is different since usually is Draco that is under Sev's thumb. Draco is such a twisted little thing and obviously we are going to have fun with him. Hopefully Severus will come up with a way to fight a little so we have a bit of a sport, we would not want Draco to get lazy. How old is Draco in this story?