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for Your Life Is Mine.

by EventualDawn

person ANON
schedule November 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Please continue this if you are still around! Absolutely loving your Draco/Snape dynamic! 

person Chantal
schedule August 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Okay, I have read and reread this countless times! It's unique and incredibly hot the way you have your Snape/Draco dynamic set up. Draco is scarily sadistic, while it appears that Snape is a closet masochist. This "arrangement" seems to suit them both quite nicely (or, more accurately, not so nicely!)...Draco is openly reveling in his role of his godfather's Master, while Snape is quietly and somewhat reluctantly embracing how much he actually wants to be his godson's "pet." Given Snape's life of being controlled by two other "masters," it seems like it could make sense that he needs to be in a master/slave relationship for sexual gratification; perhaps he doesn't function well anymore without being controlled and all ability to choose is removed. Seems like a result of a lot of abuse, but he undoubtedly has a natural inclination to be submissive. It may be that the scary persona everyone else sees is all an act so that this shameful secret side of him remains hidden. Then Draco and his own twisted needs and devious plans comes along and actually unwittingly unveils Snape's hidden desires and inclinations. What an unexpected twist to their arrangement, indeed! What you've created here is a refreshingly different Snape/Draco slash story. The role-reversal adds a different level of titillating storytelling. I find it ironic that it is actually Neville's fault for leaving the password where Draco could find it and set off the domino effect that leads to his most-feared professor's life becoming the property of someone else. Draco should really reward Neville by making Snape do something  for him to show his gratitude - and then, of course, oblivate him. ;) There were other characters listed and there are so many things that Draco could have his pet do for his entertainment...just how does Severus make it through the next day with a pouch, a ring, and no clothes under his robes all while going through his usual daily business? And finally, what actually happens? Does Snape decide he's had enough and actually finds a way out of this "rat trap" Draco has him in, does anyone find out, does Draco "share" his toy, do the roles reverse and finds Draco wishing he never tried to take Snape's life as his property? ...because payback can not only be a b*tch, but in this story, I can see it being a long drawn-out torture. Oh, the possibilities! This has so much potential...if you're still out there and at all inclined to continue, I implore you to do so!

person Katie
schedule October 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE, PLEASE continue!!!
schedule October 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
sadist!draco and submissive severus is a very pretty combination! too bad you gave up on that story - although i can see that it would have been kind of hard to develop the plot further.

anyway - i find the reversed positions of draco and severus far more intriguing than the usual draco/severus story.
schedule June 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting, can't wait for more!
person Viktoria
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story is pretty fucking amazing- I love this pairing and its pretty amazing to see severus cowering and Draco being draco the sadistic fuck he is- theyre perfect
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Plz update soon
person cravedom
schedule October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes! The story is back. We have so very few Draco/Snape stories and this one is so hot and twisted. What is Severus going to do? Draco has taken all control from him and does not seem to be getting tired of his litte game. Will somebody notice Snape is acting strange?
person stray523
schedule October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was super hot! I love seeing Draco behave truly evilly. I can hardly wait to see what you write next.
person cravedom
schedule August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Having orgasms on command would be really good or really bad depending on the circumstances and while Severus life sucks right now, even he must admit that cumming in a classroom full of students while simply standing there suposedly looking at a potion is incredibly hot. I do not concider myself evil but having that power over somebody would no doubt cause me to torture the poor soul. One can always dream...