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for Forsake All Others

by saffron

schedule November 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i forgot to ask to please be added to the very long list that i can imagine there is to be notified when the story is updated for the new chapter and please someone explain to MacPhisto that women are pregnant for 40 weeks and yes it is ten months but you have to remember that the first "month" is the egg and sperm meeting and the egg mutiplying and attaching to the uterus wall and the womens body preparing its self the the rest of the pregnancy....
schedule November 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have read many "Dramione" fanfic and I have to say that the characterization of Draco Malfoy in the story is the best. By that, I mean the Draco in these stories usually do not sound like the Draco from the books. This one is by far the best I have read. Excellent story line as well. I feel that the story is much more developed than some other Dramione stories that I have read. I am antsy to see what happens next, and that doesn't usually happen. Excellent job over all.

If possible, I would like to be added to the list (which I guess is rather long) of those who will be notified of when the next chapter will be posted.

Thanks!
person KELMO
schedule October 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant story
schedule September 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ah I can't wait for the next chapter.
person MIverson
schedule September 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am waiting with baited breath to read your next chapter. I can't wait to find out what Draco's reaction is when he wakes up. LOL! Please, Please get the next chapter up soon.

Cosmyk
schedule May 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
reviewing Chapter 1:

who says incest is a bad thing?
schedule May 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4:

again, what's so wrong with pregnant sex?
schedule May 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8:

I cringed at the "dark" remark
schedule May 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9:

points in quidditch go by units of 10
schedule May 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10:

you do realize that 40 weeks is TEN months?

most human females only take NINE months to gestate a fetus