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for Forsake All Others

by saffron

person Aly
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great Start please more more more
person Candy Cane
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You mentioned this idea to me. I am stoked you are writing it. It will be a great distraction until we can read more chapters of Escape to Love.

So far wonderful fic. Hope things get more Juicy :P I know they will.
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Finished reading all five.

Kick ass story girl. Draco is a prick in this one. Love Nasty Draco. Awwww he secretly likes Hermione. Too Cute!

More sweetie more
person Snowe
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think you need to do some research about pregnancy. No one has a noticeable bump at three weeks! Hermione would be able to dress around it until she's through the first trimester, and maybe even until four or five months, because the robes at Hogwarts are so loose.
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*blushes* you were right and I was wrong about the bump at two weeks. Happy you fixed the fic to be accurate.

I love the fic better now.
person Snowe
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
http://pregnancy.baby-gaga.com/photos/

This has a weekly "calendar" with pictures of different women.

http://theshapeofamother.com/ (nudity)

Pictures of women before, during, and after pregnancy--all ages and sizes.

These might help you visualize the pregnancy as you write!
person Valen
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I feel dumb you actually posted the story knowing there was flaws just to prove us wrong. that takes guts girl. I hope people will read this story and not judge the story because how you posted it. I love this version better.

You were right about the bump not showing, i feel stupid.

great story
person Iamalozer
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome Draco is an arse in this fic. reading the reviews want to say you are brave for posting a flawed story on purpose not many authors would do that.
please give me more
person Anon
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great start please update soon
person Frankie
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is fantabulous I'm a guy and I don't usually read preg stories i like this hermione vomiting in class was funny i am a fan of escape to love so i know this fic will be filled with humor.