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WOW! wonderful Chapter I can not wait for the other one. I can not wait for Draco to find out. You said in the 8th or 9th chapter right? I cannot wait. Please update soon!

haha, i love this chap...especially when they played chess :) okay i hope we will know when Draco know that he is father sooner :D

and i also waiting for Escape to love too :)

The story shows obvious writing potential yet the content show how extremely young you must be. at 7 weeks your not even 2 months pregnant. Most women don't find out till close to that time. You don't get morning sickness till closer to 2 months. The heart isn't formed and beating until 12 weeks which is when your 1st trimester ends... its the marker. You don't show until at least 4 months and thats WAY early. 125 pounds is a healthy weight for any woman 5 foot 3 and up and wouldn't be considered fat. 110 would actually be TOO thin for normal unless she is very very short. You WANT to eat enough and gain weight for the baby!! you don't gain most of the weight till into the 2nd trimester. You don't get back pain till after the 5 or 6th month at the earliest since the pain is from the expanding baby pulling at the ligaments in your hips and lower back. Now I wanted to show how grossly ignorant you are of pregnancy and suggest you go to your library and read through "what to expect when you expecting'. You could skim it and learn enough to at least write this closer to reality.

I really like this story so far! I really hope you keep updating! Your fan
Tiffany

i like it so much =)
hope u can post the next chapter ASAP

I want more. Please update soon.

Wonderful story I hope you continue this

please hurry i want more this is such a good story great job

dun dun dun and the father is draco malfoy. i loved this chapter it was funny thought sad for hermoine. i wonder when draco is going to find out. Next time give us a long chapter i really want to read more. oh and did you notice that you keep putting the closet(or something like that) is clear instead of the coast is clear?

I love this fic. I know that it's un-beta'd so I understand the mistakes. Hey no one is perfect. I am loving this fic. I hope you update soon.

I cannot wait to see what will happen next. Great job!