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for Forsake All Others

by saffron

person rebroars
schedule January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have to say I literally laughed out loud when Hermione was in labor. It was excellent! I remember when I was in labor with my son and my mom was like "you're doing great!" and I was just so pissed at everyone LOL. I can't wait for the next chapter when Draco wakes up!
schedule January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay first of all i am still laughing out loud at her outbursts. I'm totally with Snape on that. Hell, I don't know how he held it in as much as he did. She was hysterical. ha ha ha ha And, that chapter was brilliantly written. Poor Draco. tee hee hee What a way to find out. And, when he wakes up Harry and Ron may kill him.

I know you gave us two, but I look forward VERY EAGERLY to the next chapter. Hurry please!!! This was great! Thank you!
HG4eva
schedule January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness, I was CACKLING during the whole chapter...a room full of idiots while you have a woman giving birth the natural way....LOL. Charmingly hilarious and deliciously wicked. And DRACO KNOWS!!!!! ROFL - his reaction was so perfect. Icing on the cake.

What will happen next with sweet baby Devon.
schedule January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omfg ! this story is awesome! please update soon!
person LIZZY
schedule December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I ENJOY YOU STORY AND CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTERS. PLEASE EMAIL ME WHEN YOU UP DATE PLEASE.
LADYSILVERFOX@MSN.COM
person Allya
schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm really intreaged by this story so far...It's a lot better than most of the ones I've read. Keep up the good work.
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awws how sweet.
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good to see you back at writing. I just love this story and it gets better every time I read. I hope everything is much better with you and your family. I know if anything happened to me, my husband or my sons, I would be taking a leave of absence. I hope to see another update soon. Fabulous writing. I will be awaiting more.
-Kefi
person Terry Moon
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good story. I have been looking for fics where Hermione is pregnant with Draco's childand I'm quite happy I've stumbled upon this one. It is charming and you're covering not only aspects of her pregnancy but also things related to being an adolescent, family, love and growing up.
Except for a few typos here and there, there's nothing wrong this the story.
Amazing work!
person odetta
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I enjoy reading your story and I'm lookoing forwards to reading the next chapters. It would be fun to have a jealous Pansy once the truth is revealed