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You have kept me on the edge of my seat with this two chapters. Thank you. I like the fact that they were exceptionally long. Made for good reading. I so look forward to the next one. Keep me updated.
Liz

My condolences on the pain you and your friend will be suffering. Death, especially from cancer, can be quite painful. I am glad you are involved with them....it is so much worse when information is withheld. Update when you can: my email is kazfeist at gmail dot com. You and your friend's family will be in my thoughts. :D

this is amazing!!!
I couldn't read fast enough to get to the end, can't wait to find out draco's reaction once he wakes up!
And everyone there...
great chapter (both of them) can't wait for the next!!!

I like it. Please update soon.

AWESOME CHAPTER!!!!

Great updates...I missed the last chapter so had two glorious chapters to read. Awesome! Draco passing out with no help was priceless. Can't wait...I know all about rewrites. I've lost about 100 pages of original fiction, and Pound of Flesh author is in the middle of a crash, too (btw: great story if you haven't read). Can't wait for Draco to wake up...and what will happen in the hospital room. Thoughts that the rewritten will feel better than what was lost (I know from experience...some feels better, but still miss other parts).

I totally understand.

I LOVED how he found out, after the baby was born, and then passing out. the birth was really realiztic, telling the boys not to look at her vaginia and Snape laughter, oh and her cussing at him. PRICELESS.

I really enjoy reading this story, just message me at livejournal-ginny_lv_harry to let meknow when you have updated this story.

OMG I love it I wonder why Draco fainted maybe Devon has blond hair
wonderful

aww thats mean don't leave us hanging

Just finished reading Chapter six and am enjoying the story. Would your Hermione hex Draco for his actions during the moonflower dew collection or is she conflicted? She seemed at times to be a hex first ask later (hormonal+pregnant) witch. Many writers have trouble with homonyms, perhaps you could ask your beta to look at those. I am glad you have the courage and ability to post such a good story. My own opinion on Anon (either one) is to ignore flamers, as they are not worth the time or trouble. Dr Pratt's query regarding the type of cat Hermione owns is interesting. Could he be a squib or something more?
On a more personal note, soldiers are using the game tetris to decrease post traumatic stress and having some success with it. I wish I had known this as would certainly have tried it.