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for Lessons on a Broom

by dirtydarella

schedule May 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I was so into this story. It was going so well, until Harry was thrusting into Draco. Why is it always Draco who's on the bottom? it's so dull and boring. I need more Top Draco. It frustrates me so much. I am a Top Draco girl.
schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:) That ending was so perfect. I have to admit that I was really surprised by that snake cane comment. lol This was fabulous. Nice job.
schedule August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another lovely story! So nice to see Scorpius not caring about Lucius' feelings. I laughed so much when I read the letter! (One tiny Britpick: Pubs in the UK generally don't have table waitress/waiter service). Other than that, great! SP
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful!
person kittycat30
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great build up, and when they finally got together... HOT!!!
person Jilliane
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM

Awww, this was sweet and romantic (I'm such a sap!) with the happy ending I adore. Yay! I'd say you lived up to the challenge.

You had a nice variation having them being private flying instructors. That's something I haven't seen until now. With Harry and Draco, I really don't mind who is top and who is bottom, either is fine, but I really enjoy an insecure Draco who is worried about doing something stupid to turn Harry away from him. I nearly choked on my own coffee laughing at Scorpius' letter to Draco, with the "If grandpa doesn't approve, tell him he can go fuck himself with his snake cane." That was priceless. James catching Harry and Draco snogging down an alley like a couple of randy schoolboys was delightful, and I would have loved to see the expression on Draco's face at James' parting shot about Scorpius and Albus.

A nicely written little oneshot that was a pleasure to read!

schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Short but sweet! Loved Scorpius' letter and shout out to Lucius and James was an amusing addition.
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it! It's really well written and I love the mixed themes. Though I have to say my favorite part was the 'Adult Grape Juice'! LOL, I love it!