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for A Nighttime Wander

by Lynette07

person Frances
schedule January 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
The only complaint I have, and it's quite common, is for you to learn the difference between "wither" and "writhe". Look them up, then revise your posts. Other than that. great story, very hot!
person Anon
schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Elphaba
schedule September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HOT! And the ending had me ROTFLMAO!
person smurff
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Haha I liked the end. Really good story! I was kind of hoping Remus would take her mouth but I guess you can't have everything. Well done, using my three favourite Gryffindors!
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well wasn't that the best thing to find when I couldn't sleep.........Thank you,