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for The Slave

by Amouse

person NightLo
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hum...having sex in the outside already? So open and dangerous yet sexy at the same time...btw, would someone find out? And Draco has not answered Harry's question...throughoutly...would Harry ask again?
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Keep going, great start so far. Lets see what you write next. Maybe a collar and toys??? Who will find out first Neville, Remus, Ron, Hermoine, Blaise, Pansy, McGonagall, Snape??? What else can Draco do?
person sable_silverrain
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was hot. I hope you DO continue this.
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh i love!
person NightLo
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hum...the two sure is courageous! With Blaise's as the audience! What will they try next? Outside?
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
intense dude totally make it a longer story
person Selera
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More please.. damn that was hot and I'd love to see more.
person ilke
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
delightful! and you should definitely make it more than a one shot. Doing it in a full common room, that was ballsy. I hope Harry gets some relief! And I hope you explore the feelings between them. Draco's little sex slave - how fabulous and you did a great job with it!
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome!
person yaoified
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like it. and i think i see a plot!!!