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July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a great scene! I can't wait to see what the "men" decide... Poor Hermione! Any chance of a happy ending here? I'm guessing no, but feel free to prove me wrong!
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July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like your story. I too am a challenge taker for this story. I like that in yours Hermione is being fought over by these two. I couldn't go there in my story. The idea of Voldemort winning has always intrigued me, what he would do to change the world. His programme is much like ancient Roman edict issued by the Emperor Augustus. It's strange that he would utilise Muggle-borns to do this. I hope you continue. The whole concept of Draco being addicted to Hermione and in such a strange way, is interesting.
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July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You do have an amazing story here and I think you might garner more hits if you change the title to something more eye catching, though unfortunately I can't come up with any suggestions. You have a great plot, Draco makes a wonderful crazy person with well thought out actions that match his motivation and Hermione actions and reactions are well in tune with her personality, as is Lucius'. I love how well you've set up the world and how you let us know exactly what's going on in it with the DE meeting.
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July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I CAN'T WAIT for more, this chapter was awesome! I hope you update soon!
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July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love it. :-)
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July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, youre a very talented writer, I love this plot and am very glad you took the challenge. Your writing style is very intense and beautiful, please continue! :)
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July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to read more of this, it looks good now, hope you update soon.
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July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good job, love!
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July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GOOD CHAPTER. MORE PLEASE.
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July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I totally forgot how you were looking for this fic, discovered it to be only a challenge, and are now taking it upon yourself to write it. You are doing a wonderful job, I love the characterizations and interactions and I can't wait to see what you have planned next ;)