rate_review Reviews

Loved it but it looks abandoned. Can't find it in another site r the author.  This is the thing I hate about fanfiction

 

When I first read this story, I thought it was going to be a Draco/Hermione story. However, it seemed that you as the author have chosen to pay more attention to Voldemort/Tonks, and that's rather disappointing because now you seem to write in a biased way. Every time Draco and Hermione interact, you make it short and a couple of paragraphs. When it comes to writing Voldemort/Tonks, or other characters, you write huge paragraphs. I thought the focus of this story is on Draco and Hermione's relationship? I know for the sake of plot you have to include other characters as well, but please, if you're not going to make Draco and Hermione the main focus anymore for this story, then do us all a favor and change the pairing category. I mean, the first two chapters were great, but then after the third or fourth chapter you really stopped giving that pairing the proper attention. I know Gryffindorclutz gave this story over to us because they didn't have the time to write it, but I think it's kind of disrespectful and rude to change the pairing of a story that someone else has established.

And one of the reviewers mentioned that this story was completed before? If that is the case, then please don't plagiarize someone else's work. If it's not, then I apologize for falsely accusing you of that.

But seriously, it's frustrating to read a story and never get what the outer label said. As far as I'm concerned, this is a Draco/Hermione story, with Noncon, and D/s, and Gryffindorclutz herself has said the stipulations for writing this fic are:

1) Hermione has to be shared between Lucius and Draco and have Lucius

I love it. I just sat here and read everything. Please update soon I can't wait to see what happends next.

What a wonderful story. Please continue!!

this is not a new fic. I know i've read this somewhere else awhile back, completed as well.

Happy Thanksgiving! You really made my Thanksgiving when I saw u updated this story!!!!!!!
I was really hoping to read more of Voldemort and Tonks and see more of their relationshio after her unveiling.
Must say I didn't expect to hear much about Fenrir but, it's a nice surprise!
Please update more often! I HEART this story lots and is very eager to read how this story will progress!!!!

Omg I hope you continue its such an intresting story you have no Idea how into it I am wow, !!!!!!! Please uodate soon

I can't wait to know wat will happen to Tonks and how Voldemort is going to handle it! I hope u haven't abandoned this story! I know u update once in a while but, just please don't completely abandon it!

Damn! This is a totally ingenious plot and I am completely sucked in! I would love to read more. The Tonks-impersonating-Bella bit totally blew my mind, I won't lie. :)

I could weep! Seriously! Though I was very disappointed by how short the chapter was...Anyway hope you update sooner rather than later!