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July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great sex scene.... hermione finally let go and just felt the feelings that george was trying to help her feel I hope that hermione can deal soon I know that it had to be hard for george to see her draw back into herself afterthe passion that they shared
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July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i am glad that ginny told hermione off a little bit she needed it... maybe this will help her get her heart in the right area
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July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad your back and I'm glad things worked out for you. The last chapter was kinda quirky but good all the same. Looking forward to the next update.
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July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful addition! Glad your back!
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July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Never feel sorry for putting your real life before a story. We will all be here when you return, anxiously awaiting your next update. Hope everything works out for you.
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July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey I really like the story line! Maybe put in some magic since they are witches and wizards but other wise I really like it a lot. Sorry things are becoming complicated. Good luck to you and I hope you write more soon!
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July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was perfect. Although, I do wish Gerorge was there to see the giant git Ron had become. I can't wait to see what you have planned next. I like that you are so energetic and take reviews so well. I also think that your idea of not prfreading until the end is wise I would get bored and lose interest as well. Great job and don't feel bad about the "FTW" my husband is a desicated gamer. I just tune him out when he starts to talk about his blessed games or as I like to call them "the other woman".lol
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July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sorry things aren't going your way right now. I hope things work out for you.
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July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am sorry I have kept quite for so long. I think the more you write the smoother yout style gets. Don't get me wrong I am loving your story. But, at the beginning it was rather choppy. I love that you update so much. Can' wait for more. I do hope there is a confrontation with Ron.
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July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for responding to my review. I think its rude when authors don't even acknowledge reviewers. I had to hunt down the husband for the translation of FTW but as usual he saved he day. I liked the last chapter I would have liked it to be a bit longer and more emotionally charged but all in all not to bad. I am dying to see what you come up with for dear sweet Ronald. I love a good and nasty fight. Keep up the good work I really am loving this story. Can't wait for the update. You are as persistant of a wrier as I am a reader.