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for The way she feels

by mitsuthenekogirl

schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story seems kinda mugglish to me so far lmfao. are they NOT witches and wizards?
cell phones? pounding on the door instead of flooing and apparting? lol. cars?
did i miss read something? i mean i know mione is muggleborn and all that...but george doesn't apparate or floo to her flat either. just confused.

anywayi only read like 5 parts or so far... its cute so far:)
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM

"Oh that's wonderful dear. I knew you would be able to start smiling again if you had something good in your life." Molly smiled as she sat on the other side of Hermione. "And you have nothing to worry dear, the slut isn't here, Fred made sure not to invite her. But Ron is here, but he is easily avoided.


lmfao mollly would not say that. calling the mother of her soon to be grandchild a whore. i mean she'd be sad for mione though.
i love that fred didn't invite her though:)
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM


"Are you on the pill?" George asked huskily as he slipped off his own boxers to show his hard dick.

thats another muggle thing......in hp stories they write charms and potions.
and then the condom haha

you rp? i do also..on myspace.
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am sorry, I have been to lazy to log in and review lately. Needless to say, I will do better so please continue and finish your great story? I just adore Ron-bashing, and you have some really good scenes here:-)) I can love Hermione paired with almost any Weasley than Ron, I hate that pairing. The twins, Charlie and Bill are good though. I doubt I will find Percy especially sexy (And Arthur, Molly and Ginny are non-existent alternatives in my universe)
Do keep writing and add a new chapter soon!!!
person xemmarayx
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i care!! even though...i've only just found your story. i care i do! ron's a bastard! and george and hermione are so sweet! bring on the big day! ( if you haven't worked it out i think your stories amaaaaazing!) xemmarayx
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I remember reviewing those chapters xxx please add more as im loving the fic...please update xxxxxxx
person Sampdoria
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant chapter, I just love how well they are together!
person KellyJCR
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great smackdown. I love it when ron gets his ass kicked. However the "F" bomb was thrown around quite a bit, I did smile when Molly yelled it though that was priceless. Looking forward to the name and the wedding. Well done!!
person KellyJCR
schedule August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I love the easy friendship Hermione and Ginny have. I also love the fact that Hermione is coping in a easier manner. Being all hormonal will just make the most trivial things seem catastrophic. Can't wait for the drama I love a good confrontation. Well done!!
person KellyJCR
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was how my husband was the first time we went for a vistit to our obgyn. To funny!!! Anyway to answer your questions I have one 6yr old named Zoe and a 3yr old names Phoebe. they are the loudest creatures in the entire world and sometimes they make be crazy. Loved the update can't wait for more.