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This was a fantastic story!! You have done a great job. Normally I am a snarry girl, but I loved this LMHP story. I loved the twists and turns and also the Draco and Charlie pairing (Of I course I would like to think Draco got knocked up by a Weasley!) It would be great if your next story is a LMHP one. There are not enough of these stories. Well done.

I really did like this story I love the way you put Charlie and Draco together and I hope Draco is, serve Lucius right,lol. I alos loved the babies hair turning red good jod.

Thank you

Pregnant Draco. Lol. Great story thanks for sharing with all the HP Fanfic reading public.

I was very shocked that Lucius severed a finger to find Harry, but that just goes to show that He really does loves his little lion. And Draco... Lucius should be ashamed of himself for acting like that. He should get over the feud and be done with it, because it seems that Charlie is not giving Draco up without a fight obviously and I thought it was very cute that Draco was scared for him.

Tonks, huh! I'd never guess that one. Good job! Maybe after everything has calm down Lucius will get an opportunity to tease Severus about his choice of witches.

Excellent work! Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!

Nemesis ^_~

of course, i loved these two chapters and cant wait to see who you end this, i hope its with the birth of Lucas! ill be keeping a look out for more chapters.

SDL

hey

very very good chapter keep going and post soon
bye bye

truly a wonderful chapter! I am glad to see Harry back with Lucius, but boy is Hucius gonna get it when harry finds out why he is missing a finger. Bit I liked seeing how much he obviously cares for Harry.

Ah! great chapter Lot's of excitement and crazy zealots! Soooooo glad that Harry is safe and sound is Luc's arms.... but considering the situation with Charlie, I have a feeling that things wont be too calm in the MAlfoy house for long:D
Glad you updated this story again!!

Cheers!

I was wondering if Maxine was really killed or just hurt. Vera was sounding as if he were dead when she was crying and telling Harry he brought this on himself, but Lucius nodded that he would not kill him when Harry released him from the ropes. Great story, I really like what you have done with the characters.