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for Could You Love Me?

by TheSiner

schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved it! Thank you so very much for finishing it. And as a request for you to think about, I would like to know the out come with Draco and Charlie. Lucius did have kittens over their relationship but he wanted as bad as he could have been and I want to know what his reaction would be if Draco did turn out to be pregnant.

Excellent work! Hope to see more of your work soon, but until then keep on writing.

Nemesis ^_~
schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the story and I rather liked the ending. I could imagine Draco pregnant also. After all Lucius' objection was always partly not having an heir for Draco. Now he doesn't have to worry about it.
person Jan
schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, your so evil! Now I'm going to be wondering if Drao is truly pregnant or not... I mean really he's part of Harry's family now, and all things impossible always seem to happen when Harry is concern, LOL!

....Maybe if you were to get many, many pleases for a short sequel, you would consider to our requests? Cause I'll be the first to beg for it ^_^

Jan

PS: For all those who read this and want a sequel too, please help me convince TheSiner to be a love and satisfy our hungry eyes!
person genna
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was horrified that HP was forced into marriage and then raped. I didn't think I'd learn to like your story, but I have.

It is kind of cute and sweet without contemplating the consent problem. The aging LM and a child HP has a couple made my stomach roll. Otherwise, I was impressed with a Charlie/Draco relationship that led to a pregnancy (I just have to believe if male pregnancy was possible, Draco would carry).

My idea for a new LM/HP story. Anyone is welcome to use it. How about HP deciding against being a Minister of Magic and becoming a diplomat to other magical realms? He meets LM on a new assignment to Avalon/Narnia/Never Never Land where LM had renewed his commitment to all things magical without Voldermort's corrupting influence. HP discovers LM had made choices with Voldermort thinking Britain could return to magical ways but it had spun out all wrong. LM had spent the last decade getting in touch with his magical core. Narcissa found love with Remus or someone equally light. Draco had explored the rest of wizarding Europe. LM was on good terms with Narcissa, her new husband and Severus but had chosen to remain in his new home.
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a very good story. I loved how you ended it, because It gave me the choice in wether or not our Dear Draco is actually carrying a WEASLEY'S baby. (SNORT). Lucius would KILL Charlie. Gods above I love BOTH those pairings.. (LM/HP and CW/DM). Thank you for Writing, and I will be looking for your next LM/HP story, please email me when you release it?

spikesgirl03@hotmail.com


~Sophie Max-Anderson

--- She has said all that I would have. Congratulations on writing such a wonderful piece.

-- Rikash Moonsword
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW... Thank you for this Fic..It was amazing. Can't wait for your next fic
person tanya
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I cant belive its over!! will there be any sequels or oneshots?? Please!! i wanna see lucus all grown up!
person Alice
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aww, it end. My fav story
person nette
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yea!!!!! Good story!!!!!! How about a seperate Draco/Charlie story. That could be a nice one. Porbably not as long as this one but a nice interlude.
person Aalto
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved this story! You write very well and only had a few measley grammars mixwd in along the way. Your story flow was exellent, smooth and flowing. You had Lucius' persona on the dot as well as Dracos. I'm eternally glad you finished this, it would have killed me (figuratively of course) if you hadn't. Thank you very much for a great story, I hope you'll someday write more.