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July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story is starting out really well! I like the story line and that Harry seems to be so innocent when it comes to sex. Please update soon!
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July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was amazing considering you're writing a story that's deviating from three books worth of knowledge, and I think it works well! haha ah the good ol days of waiting for book 5 :) This story certainly made me cry towards the end and I can't wait to read more!! update soon?? :)
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July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
Good to you have you back! I was so disappointed when you left this story. It's too good be left unfinished. Can't wait for the future chapters....
Good to you have you back! I was so disappointed when you left this story. It's too good be left unfinished. Can't wait for the future chapters....
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July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the story so far, but PLEASE don't list that your story is complete UNTIL it is completely posted on the site! I only started to read this now because it was listed as complete. I was really pissed when I got to the end of what was posted and that wasn't the end of the story. Thanks.
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July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Liked it the first time I read it and I still like it.
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July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay another story. Lucius may push Harry too far, he is looking at this marriage as a business deal with perks.
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July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Where is part two???
WRITE!!!
I feel so sad for Harry and I was really frightend that he would commit suicide...I'm still afraid that he will so now after his talk with Draco...
and Draco is an asshole in this story, sorry, but he is...*doesn't like him at all*
Hope you update soon!
Chau,
LIls
WRITE!!!
I feel so sad for Harry and I was really frightend that he would commit suicide...I'm still afraid that he will so now after his talk with Draco...
and Draco is an asshole in this story, sorry, but he is...*doesn't like him at all*
Hope you update soon!
Chau,
LIls
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July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy fcuk this was sooooo good! Loved the absolutely naive Harry you've created. Reminds of a the norwegian book called "Betrayed" written in 1892, where a girl named Ory is married off to a captain without any ideas of what marriage or sex entails . Very very tragic book, but I am hoping that you're story will turn out much better then this:D
Looking forward to your next update!!
Poor poor Harry!
Cheers!
Looking forward to your next update!!
Poor poor Harry!
Cheers!
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July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I remember reading this before. Is it a repost?
Anyway, I really like the story. Are you going to go in the same direction as before? It would be really interesting if you did.
But I like the was the original was too. A love/hate/love type of thing.
Well I can't wait till you update again!
Anyway, I really like the story. Are you going to go in the same direction as before? It would be really interesting if you did.
But I like the was the original was too. A love/hate/love type of thing.
Well I can't wait till you update again!