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for Could You Love Me?

by TheSiner

schedule September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OK so are Harry and Lucius ever going to get together? it's been over 3 months since Lucius started "making up" with Harry. He needs to do something besides kiss. Hope to see the next chapter soon. Great Story.
schedule September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not too much trouble, I hope? :-) Loving the story and the growing bond between Lucius and Harry, Harry and Draco, Draco and Charlie, but mostly Lucius and Harry.
person alma
schedule September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter.
person llyoung
schedule September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the Draco and Charlie parts of your story.
schedule September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(Now, for the first time since Harry had been forced to comfort Voldemort, Albus saw Harry,--)

COMFORT Voldemort? What was that line really supposed to say?
person wynja
schedule September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooohhhh.... luc groveling and draco-charlie is really hot! Loved this chap...
person Anon
schedule September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Generally don't like any malfoy/weasly pairing (can't see it. too much hatred. don't want feud to end.) That said, really like the harry/lucius pairing. Was a bit unsure when I started reading but I think that you really make it work. I think that the baby could be named after Severus. Just think, they always meddle in his life and try and force him to be sociable, what better way to ensure this then by naming the baby after him and forcing him into godfatherhood...all the birthday parties, and holidays he would be unable to skip...in the name of duty!
schedule September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thank you for yet another wonderful chapter.

I do wonder though; why when you are pregnant does your stomache suddenly turn into public property. You might as well be wearing a sign saying "touch my tummy, I'm a new mum" because perfect strangers suddenly accost you touching you without so much as a by your leave. It's strange and incredibly annoying. Ah well, as I'm sure many other people are; I shall wait patiently for new chapters.
person Ithilwen
schedule September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Two great parts!!!

It seems things are progressing nicely with H/L. And they are having a little boy :)
Still I really liked that finally Harry is comming out of his shell again. With that public scene in the Manor.

I still think Rasputin has a hidden agenda.. I just have a sort of off feeling about him.

And Draco and Charlie.. I really hope they get together.. They will make a great couple.. I'm sure the Dragon tamer can take care of the "Dragon"
But I wonder what the families will say.

person zer0
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you take too long btwn updates!! but i loved this part, the way lucius acts and Harry opens to him, the kiss was son cute!! the intents of profesor rasputin are finally showing..as for draco i