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Hmmm....hand-fed veggies by none other than lucious Lucius? I think I could down about a bushel ful! LoL

I am thouroughly enjoying this delightful story. I adore angst and when you toss in some lovely boy-kissy-boy action and suspence, you've got a prize-winning package. I'm dying to find out if Rasputin is more than just an obsessed 'Harry Potter' fangirl with devious intentions. Oooh...and a furious Lucius to the rescue, let alone the whole Weasley clan out for blood. Man oh Man, the next chapter is gonna be good. I sure hope I don't have to wait too long. Great stuff!

alot!! and then some!

God! I waited like forever!! And the next chapter is going to be even worse!! Do you get a kick our of torturing us poor people??
Really really enjoyed this chapter! Sort of funny to see both Malfoy's desperately trying to get laid! Loved the Valentine from Luc also! Really sweet and yeah so the second room thing was a bit underhanded, but hey it's bloody Malfoy!
Am soooooooooo looking forward to the next chapter!

Cheers!

I was dreading that something like that is going to happen.
He really is naive. Where's Gry.. I mean Slytherin Draco to the rescue.

Nice part.. THE talk. Oh how embarrasing that can get! And to have it with your spouse because noone have ever cared to give it before.
But I'm happy Harry got to talk about what he wanted. To get some of the questions out in the open.

Draco ans Charlie are progressing nicely. Even If Draco wants to go all the way faster than he should I think. Charlie will be good for him.

And Harry and Lucius went now on a Date. I hope your have written some about it. I would love to read..

He's finally starting to come out of his shell again. I hope his Husband is up to the challenge!!

Waiting for more!!

and now I remember WHY I quit reading this story!

Oh my... Right, i've read from start to this final chapter and your story's absolutely excellent! I liked that you were using a very familiar plotline as the basis but you made it - by standards of speech, narration, and experiences - your very own. Or rather, the characters'... It's like you've taken the outline of a picture so often used (and loved! Harry's forced marriage, forced sex, pregnancy...eventual romance) and then painted in with new colours, stenciled finer points with gold-dust and given it its own breath to live.

=)

You've made me achingly curious about what Draco recovered from the Defence Professor and got me riled when Draco wanted to put it off (which true to character, is very Draco) and every way that Harry reacted wasn't just some truckload of heavy depression and then suddenly 'he's cured and happy with love!'... it's a progression, unexpected but well thought out (from a writer's pov).

So yes, you are an excellent writer for having a very well thought out plot.

Eiri.

ps: They wrap up fish and chips with brown paper and you're right, I hardly ever see them wrap it up in newspaper anymore. Which is good coz having print on your chips/fish about house prices isnt very appetising. (pps: I like fish & chips - good for when you're cold and lazy)

:)

Yay! They're finally taking notice that Harry's starting to be himself and happy with his new life. Thought I hope Draco found something important!

Please update chapter 11 soon ^_^

Jan

Yeah! Lovely embarrassing chapter! Looking eagerly forward to more, and perhaps some experimenting?!

Cheers!