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Wow, what a reaction from Lucius about Draco and Charlie...-tilts head- interesting...

post sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
bye bye

I love this story I read it a couple months ago and then found it today with even more chapters I got really excited. is there anyway I could get an email or somthing when you update this? I just love it so much

I think I hate you...ending a chapter like that! And tomorrow I'm starting university and won't be able to concentrate properly *pouts*
I really like your story especially the way you write Harry and Lucius and I absolutely love the idea of Draco and Charlie! I hope we get to read more about them!

One thing you should pay a bit more attention to is grammar you sometimes make mistakes with the past tense forms and at one point you wrote about Harry "comforting" Voldemort...I think you wanted to say "confront" ;)

I'm reading the scene with Lucius "tasting" Harry and telling him to eat his vegetables and no chocolate and I just find it soooo endearing!!!!!
CUTE!
*continues reading*
Just wanted to tell you that I love this scene...(and Draco beforehead, too^^)

but why did you have to end it so sadly? :( poor Lucius...

and now Harry is getting kidnapped...
PLEASE UPDATE FAST!!!!! AND SOON!!!! AND NOW!!! ;)

thx and have a great weekend!

love your story,
LIls :)

Poor Draco! Frustration like that is a bitch. But I'm sure Charlie is just making it so it will be great when they finally get together!

And It all started and ended very well for Harry on Valentines. But oh the day after.. He had the right to be angry. I would have been too! Lucius shouldn't have done it like that.
But I KNEW IT Rasputin was just waiting for some exuse to do something!!!!

Oh PLEASE let Harry come back safe and sound. The baby aswell.. And please Let Lucius hurt Rasputin some!!

And as for the poll lol.
I'm not that fond of all veggies. But with that man handfeeding it. Esp with several dips etc. Would eat my share for a while LOL.

cant end it there!

*cries, whimpers sniffs*

i love this fic, and though some of you english isnt perfect i read the part where english wasnt your mother tongue, and i think you have done better then some english people while writing. and all the little mistakes arent that hard to get around while reading.

i also think this is amazing and really want to know what happens... he isnt using polyjuice is he. and what did the paper say that draco found. lucius is not going to be happy that harry has disappeared again. and i think only dracos gonna know who but no ones going to believe him.

um also the draco charlie thing is ingenius! and severus.... and tonks? am i correct?

anyways looking forward to the next chapter

SDL

very very good chapter keep going and post soon
bye bye

Hmm... A whole helluva lot of veggies.

LOL! I HOPE DRACO CATCHES THAT BASTARD RASPUTIN!!!!!!!

GERR!!!! *GROWL*


~Sophie Max-Anderson


Please forgive her, she's rather, passionate about this story. It's a good change to see her show any emotion at all. Thank you, from her and from me, for writing this story.

-- Rikash Moonsword (the Muse.....how degrading... reduced to two simple words, when you can just write the name just as easily.....sorry, i am ranting about those who do not treat their muse with respect...)

So Draco was right and now Harry needs rescueing. Lucius only has himself to blame but will he be able to get to Harry? What about the baby, Oh I hope you don't let anything happen to him. Of course everyone thinks they know what is best for Harry. Please don't keep us in suspence for long.