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Lucius and Harry need a daughter (with Harry's dark hair. Lucius will have the full set: blond, Red and brunette!) Imagine how protective he would be, poor girl! Is Draco pregnant? Will it be a redhead too? Imagine Christmas with Arthur and Lucius' family all together! please do a sequel one-shot or an epilogue.

This is the second time I have read this story and I loved it all over again!!

I really like your Story!The plot and the characters are great and sometimes it's very funny. Great work!
PS:grauer Retter^^ Grau is the colour, grauer is the adjective. I really like it though how you use german words in your Story.I hope my english is ok, it's not my native language^^

This is such a wonderful story. You managed a dark angsty fic turned romance believably and that's a challenge few accomplish. I like so many things about this fic. The treaty vegetables when feed by gorgeously handsome blondes and Draco's desire for a baby brother. Charlie's attitude and Snape and ... well all of your characters even if I don't care for their behaviors and actions I liked how you wrote them. Severus's legilimency triggered a reasonable attitude adjustment and your OC soccer and Vera/community were great too. Oh yes, the dots are a favorite of mine and thanks so much for finishing this. Now I have to scroll back and locate the Ancient curses, blessings story you mentioned. If your fic is mediocre the grading curve you set is high, so that must be an awesome fic!

It was a well paced evolution for Lucius and Harry. Severus's ligilency

Your story was amazing! I loved it! I'm a little sad that I have finished to read it because it was so great! Thank you :-)

Yeah! I've finally found this one again!

This is the story that got me interested in this website, and after I created my account, I couldn't find it again, until now. This is a great story, keep up the amazing work with your other stories!

I really like this story and the plot, even how you have portrayed the characters is really appealing, but its almost painful to read with the mistakes in the text, the spelling and grammar really need work, sentences are missing words that make them read correctly, or the words are not ordered correctly. The tenses used are really off, the verb tenses dont always match the sentence. I recommend reading out loud, even if its only under your breath, what you have written, it makes it really easy to catch mistakes.

I fell in love story, as exciting as they became a couple in love. The end with Draco was fun. Kisses

This was a cute story with them together. Unfortunately there are not many of this pairing. I do say though that Harry really needs an attitude adjustment. He was a butt most of the way through. I get what happened to him was horrible but stop whining already. Not sure if I was Lucius I would put up with his act. To each their own I guess

confused at alot of things why harry didnt put on the cloak and run away what happened to the order protecting him. It was very easy for harry to hide for a year until he could dissolve the agreement. And this harry has no life in him ok he would have been in denial and the panicky but them he would have found a solution with hermione and weasleys they wouldnt have left him alone like that. He crying and fainting the whole time and he had killed voldemort so really what happened